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Jmaster49


Avid writer, watcher of anime, player of games, and chef in my spare time.

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Keep up the good work

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Thanks! Hope you like it!

This is step one secure the whiskey

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Lmao something like that. Everyone needs to have a good drink before they head out to kill!

I wish Axel luck on his quest!
And you too, for writing this :twilightsmile:

abducted him (Axel) and the rest of his family.

Save for Axel who had managed to hide just in time.

...Now, I haven't actually read this story yet, but did they abduct Axel or not?

Comment posted by Jmaster49 deleted Aug 16th, 2021

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'Him' is referring to Axel's father on that line. Sorry. Need to make that clearer.

{Taking off my hat in respect}😔

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For the death of Maxine that’s what.

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Yeah, Gatto kind of went off the handle. Even Mio was upset at this as you can see. The whole plan has gone south.

Damn. To suffer defeat is never an easy thing, but strenght comes from it as well. Hope Gatto dies slowly; promise me you will have him suffer.

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Oh trust me, he will. 😈

On boy, we got ourselves a dark brooding bounty hunter looking for revenge.
Gotta give ya credit, good back story.

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Thanks! His character is gonna undergo quite the developments as you'll soon see. Keep going when you can!

If this is what I think it is. In case it is, go for the last one. Don’t ask why, just help speeding up this into more important matters like completing the mission.

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That's a good decision and yes, it is. This is a brothel. And don't worry, the mission won't be ignored for too long.

But Axel will be having some personal time and open up about himself here.

Ok, a little too much if you ask me; but alright I’ll take it. By the time you get around to finishing of Gatto, can I ask something out of you? PM me later when you get the chance.

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Don't worry, the upcoming chapters won't be just pure sex. There's going to be important dialogue in between it.

“That’s a good young man~!” she moo’d with a small giggle, and reached forward to pinch his cheek, “You’re so adorable when you finally open up, you know that?”

That got a laugh out of me.

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Glad you're enjoying it! 😁

Litterbox Ridge

:rainbowlaugh:

I have no idea how I missed that on my first read-through!

How can a story that updates this often not be complete?

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There's a lot happening and a lot that will go on. Hopefully you give it a read. 😁

Can I get a straight answer from when I ask this? What’s the current situation of both sides? I mean Our hero and his party vs their enemy, including their boss.

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That's a good question. Axel and co are currently trying to figure out the mage's book. As for the enemy, you'll have to wait and see.

Please tell me that we get that boss man for this. By the way, didn’t get the big boss’ name.

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The boss's name will be revealed eventually. But yes, we will get them all back for this when the time comes.

Another bounty? What about that dragon that escaped? And the name of the boss behind it all?😕

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They have no choice but to pull out for now. Tony's dead and Rose needs time to grieve.

But they aren't giving up. Don't worry.

I hope they all die slowly. Oh, by the way, thank you for at least letting us see some villain activity. For once we see what the bad guys are up to for a change. And the plan to hit them where it hurts by raiding their stuff, I agree.:heart::twilightsmile:

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Oh don't you worry. We'll be seeing even more info on our enemies soon enough!

Good, now that the dragon is out of the way.

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For now. Unfortunately he's still alive. But Mio needs medical attention first.

I don’t get how this leads to the big boss man.:rainbowhuh: That’s all I’m saying.

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The implication is that the boss is actually boss "woman" Zula from the civil war.

Right now Axel and co are messing with her connections in other parts of the world.

Finally, some progress. And I had a sublime thought Jmaster49. Not to bother you with future writings; let alone telling you what to do. But could you, maybe write names of chapters instead of numbers? That way people can keep track without hitting fav buttons. Just saying.

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Yeah we're getting there. This is my ideal region that exists East of Saddle Arabia and we have their gangs involved with the Abyssinians.

And maybe, but I honestly can't think of names for the chapters. I'll certainly consider it though!

The Lord Of The Land

I’m curious about what all of these character labels are for…

I honestly can't think of names for the chapters.

As a writer, I can relate to this.

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The labels follow the trend of the Old West where people get nicknames for their actions. Like "Curly Bill" Brocious, "Old Man" Clanton, and "Wild Bill" Hicock.

And yes. I just got through naming 300+ chapters for Interviews With Equestrians. I'm not of the mind to do it again. XD

Time to pull the plug on this pit fight.

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Well this pit fight has a special set of rules that one must follow as you'll soon see. 😆

Well… that wasn’t the kind of underground fight I was expecting.

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That's how they avoid mismatches. No need for fancy techniques, just last longer than your opponent and you win pony slaves.

If I may make a suggestion. If Axel were to enter that ring, he could stall for Kora to poke around, and free the pony of his choosing IF he wins that is. But as one of the characters said: Last 3 minutes which is enough time to look around while the public is distracted.

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Good suggestion, friend! That's actually what the plan is...sort of. You'll see. 😉

Ok, so Chang is fighting now. I’m ok with this. It’s just that Axel is a much better choice because he is a battle-harden character. That, and if he did win, his name would reach the boss’ ear and make a beacon of terror to our foe. Just letting you know my reasons.

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