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π€€ Oh, God, I can't tell if this is a fetish or a porno. But DAMN! This is hot as hell. Cheerilee, being one of the many hottest mares around. But let's see who's the mystery mare to join them. Wait. π I think I can take a wild guess considering the tags, but I might be wrong.
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They really do love each other but they can be a bit silly at times. It's hard to stay in character when your partner is that great. π
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π I can tell. Thank God Cozster is doing her own job thing at the moment while these two start their herd. Less of a risk of her walking in on them. Or the herd.
Excellent work
Hold up, I'm confused. Is this sex ed session for Limestone or Treehugger?
if Pale don't wanna do it, i will
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Limestone! π
It's about to get rock hard! π
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Oh don't worry, he's into farm girls.π
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π Figures. Because it's sounds like she's inviting Treehugger for a threesome. Which is fine by me, of course.
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well i'll just pretend its me then LOL
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Nah, not yet. Each mare is gonna get dedicated...sex ed lessons one-on-one. Then we'll move onto group projects!
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In that case, if Applejack weren't gay in canon, he'll take her for a ride.π
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Seems like you have this all planned out.
π I can think of a reason why. Right, JM? I mean, I honestly never pegged you as the voyeur type. Let alone have Cheerilee be one.
And Limestone really did rock his world. The term 'Rock Hard' doesn't even begin to display how I'm feeling right now. π Hell, I'll just say it: π I want in on this!
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Real life horses follow the herd/harem rules, so it's in their nature to love on one stallion! π
And yes, Lime was very frustrated, but Pale helped her through it. Glad you enjoyed it! There's more to come! π
Looks like Pale and Cozy have something in common. They both want to help others with their personal issues. Difference is, Cozster is a more kid-friendly type of help while Pale's type of help is a more kinky mature kind.
π Damn. Poor Rara. As if my overall negative opinion of the bastard isn't lowered enough. Now you can add pervert, blackmail or rapist to the list. Maybe all of the above.
Agreed, even though I wholeheartedly agree with the first part.
Good question. And haven't he already done roleplay with his wife?
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Yeah they are very similar huh? Of course, Pale is treating mares with different sets of issues entirely.
Yeah he was a real bitch alright. Hard to imagine that the writers managed to sneak a Svengali reference into a kid's show. Svengali is a character from a 1800s novel that did stuff to a young Irish woman kinda similar to what Rara described. Now she needs help to quell these urges her body has.
And yes while he and Cheerilee have roleplayed before, he's both interested and scared of what Coloratura has up her sleeves because he doesn't know her kinks.
Blindfolding her husband? This might be one of Cheerilee"s kinks. π
π² Holy shit! The image in my head imagines Rara as a porn star in her Countess outfit. π
God, I hope not, Pale. The Countess is back. And she appears playfully ruthless. Let's hope that she's not too ruthless so she wouldn't mirror the actions of a certain dead bastard.
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They do like that stuff sometimes, yes. π
And that's an interesting way to look at it. I love her Countess Outfit personally and it does make a good fit for more 'adult' themed shows. π
Don't worry. It's just an act. She's just looking to vent her frustrations onto him. π
π°π *breathing heavily* Damn, I'm touching myself too hard right now. I never pictured the Countess to be the dominant type. But why the hell should I complain? Treehugger might as well be the same. Pale, you lucky bastard.π
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Glad you liked it! Coloratura was really intent on taking control of her body back and Pale gave her the comfort she so desperately needed. Everybody wins!
... Okay. Not Treehugger. Not yet. Now we have Moondancer next. A very plump and obese Moondancer. When did she decide to gain weight through ice cream? Rarity, I understand, but Moondancer? She doesn't strike me as the type to let herself go like that. She must really need that motivation.π
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Well not super obese, she's just gained a bit of weight that's gone mostly to her butt. π
And depression sucks. She really needs to get out more and her friends can only do so much for her. The love of a stallion is something different... π
Plump and Sassy, dat ASSy as well, Moondancer is great. And with Coloratura in that last chapter along with Moonie now you're basically hitting all the mares I love. In ways I dig, nice. Inspires me to chomp the metaphorical bit and write clop myself. So I can say it's what I like...just wish I could write good.11301038
Hey, it'll come to you over time, friend. This story wasn't something I just came up with overnight. As you can see, this is a sequel to a 300+ long chapter fic (which took a full real-life year to finish) in which Pale saves not only Cozy Glow but all of Equestria along with everyone he knows and loves. This fic here is more or less his "downtime" in that he's treating these mares with some love since they're super lonely and the stallion population is very imbalanced which makes it hard for them to find anyone. Pale is here to give them the affection that they've been missing. Moondancer especially is pretty lonesome after being a hermit for so long. Her friends are one thing, but the affection from a stallion is something she's secretly wanted and can't find so Pale intends to give it to her.
Point is, you'll be able to write this good if you keep at it and give your writing a purpose as I've did mine. Don't give up, friend. But I do appreciate the praise and plan on writing more spicy bits. Stay tuned!
Okay, so Moondancer wishes to solve the population problem where stallions are concerned. And to do that, she's going to bring out her inner Twilight Sparkle to examine Pale. This'll be interesting.
π Oh, this'll be very interesting. Could Moondancer be interested in the sport of 'intimate' wrestling?
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Exactly. Pale is a good example of an apex stallion with perfect genes so she hopes to splice them and help mares find other stallions similar to himself so breeding can help offset the population issue.
And there's a reason she likes wrestling. You'll see! π
Sex in a library? Aren't libraries supposed to be quiet regardless of whether they're alone or not?
...Huh. Well, of course, it's her. The, assumingly, first pony that Pale has helped during his journey to redeem Cozy. I was half expecting Princess Twilight since libraries are her thing. Which means...π€€πare we gonna have a threesome? In a library?
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That's the fun of being in public. The exhilarating fear of being caught especially in a place that demands quiet. π
And no, sorry. We'll be focusing solely on Moondancer for now. That's not to say FDL couldn't appear in a future chapter though... π
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π Looking forward to that.
All I can say is Boo-fucking-Hoo. I HIGHLY doubt she was actually forced to do anything. Females will spread their legs for as many people as it takes to get ahead so that they don't have to do ACTUAL work.
Easily the hottest chapter thus far. But biased. Me and Pale have similar interests. even Moondancerβs personality is sexy.
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We're not done yet. It's a,out to get even better and hotter, friend! π
That was hot and I very much enjoyed reading! Very much ;)
And likely will, over and over again. Coloratura and now Moondancer, at this rate you'll use up my favorite mares and not have anypony write about when I try too...
...Whoa. That was intense. Like princess-level intense. This is why I'm a fan of hardcore lovemaking. Especially the anthro lovemaking. And now we have a new member of the herd. And did Moondancer say she was envious of Cheerilee? Hope that doesn't cause problems.
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Hey I don't hold a monopoly on fan fiction. I fully encourage you to write about your favorite fantasies my friend!
But I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope you stay tuned for what's next. π
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Glad you enjoyed it. That was the first and many anthro sessions so stay tuned!
And she is jealous in the sense that Cheerilee snagged Pale first. But given how actual mustang horses breed in harems in real life, she'll happily take a place as a secondary mare. π
And behold, fillies and gentlecolts, Pale, Equestria's famous detective is back with his lovely sidepiece/life partner, Cheerilee on a case. It's a nice change of pace without Corkscrew in his corner, but hey, whatever works. π
Excellent work
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Thanks! Anything you like in particular?
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Love your work off this story
Awesome work canβt wait for your next chapter
Huh. Wasn't aware that you can marry into a herd. Hell, I'm surprised that there was a current herd in Manehattan at all.
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Yup. The tradition is still alive and well. Orange just wanted to show Pale that he can make it work.
Excellent work keep it up
Sounds like there's crime going on in Manehattan. And Suri is caught up in a mess that's not of her own volition. Luckily, Pale is on the case. And it's a good thing Cheerilee stayed behind. But he best be careful. Because however experienced he is in working cases like this, a crime family should not be underestimated or trifled with. Most crime families tend to make things personal when that happens.
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Yeah the poor gal just can't catch a break. Pale is gonna need to pull out all the stops for this one. π€
Bleh, foot fetish is just as disgusting as scat and watersports.
Seems Cheerilee has been busy telling others about the herd. And she's hardly done yet.
As for the threesome, barring the details of how turned on I am about this, I didn't exactly expect it to be between Babs and Suri. Though, I'll take what I can get. π
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Suri knew she needed Pale's help and that he couldn't resist a willing herd horse and Babs wasn't about to let her have all the fun. π