One last goodbye, to make a friend happy.
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Gonna read this as long as you update "Strange Ways"
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EDIT:
What's up with it always being Twi and Dash...
one or the other essentially killing themselves?
"She ahd"
"selfish for he rto"
^ simple mistakes
Rest was simply amazing, and you lied you betch. you said this would be sad, but it had a happy ending. Therefore, good feels happened.
Not bad, but the proper spelling is 'vial'. 'Vile' means something unappealing or disgusting.
In the last paragraph, there are two spelling mistakes. 'ahd' should be 'had', and 'he rto' should be 'her to'. Otherwise, it was a decent fic, I liked it.
dat ending...
That was awesome.
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That's not a sad story! That's a happy one!
1240574 1240682 You should know me, I like sad, with a happy ending. It gives the best of feels in my opinion.
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Dat ending
For the 3rd time now 
Short and awesome. That's what I like 
And, not "vile", but "vial"
1240746
Well, yes, I love a good and happy ending as well.
I don't normally go for sad stories, but this has risen to the occasion in my mind. Plus, I'm a sucker for happy endings. Well done.
1240670
Indeed.
I like this story, even if it stays a one-shot. It's not nearly as sad a story as i thought it'd be, and i'm pleasantly surprised by that, as i do like sad stories, i just don't like tragic stories.
Oh, huzzah! Finally a happy ending!
for the record peeps, the sad tag just means that the story intends to cause sad or at least bittersweet feels, regardless of ending. Tragedy is when the ending is supposed to be sad and unfair. There is a difference.
This.
This is why I watch you.
I'll be honest Rainbow Dash, that had to be the most practical, pragmatic thing I've ever seen you do.
This is a great story. I wish it had more to the ending after "Rainbow", but I suppose a good cliffhanger is well worth it.
Anyways, in your letter, in the last sentence, when Twilight is asking for Rainbow to spread the word about her passing, it should be a comma joining the two sentences, not a period. That part confused me a little, but the rest is perfect. Loved it.
nice
Haha, Twilight made a potion that can raise the dead... Now she should have plenty enough time to make another vial for Rainbow.
Freaky, dramatic and hearthwarming. Nicely done!