There's only so much sadness, tragedy and trauma one pony can take. And every time, a little piece of the heart is torn, and can never be recovered. When people die, all their memories are lost. But what about the ones that never die?
First fic. Rate what you think it deserves.
Spanish translation by Gustavo_Glass Here
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Not sure if celestia would choose that way to exit the world. Thats my only criticism otherwise it seemed good to me
This was done very well. Really sad, but that's what you were going for, so it's good. Well done, sir.
I would think royalty would just take poison and go to sleep or something else less messy. Besides that its a touching story.
trash.
.......... How does she die if she's IMORTAL? ( which means nothing can kill her)
978005
No, 'immortal' means unable to die of old age. 'Invincible' means you can't be hurt or die.
Maybe it's my interpretation of the word.
A bit rushed but sill sad, WHY?
978005 Immortality means that you do not age once you get into adulthood. Invincibility is immortality and the inability to die.
That... that... that last line...
Could she really die? If she's immortal she could have taken poison like doctorwhooves said. Not sure it would kill her, but still could a regular knife kill her?
Like speedy said, it's the inability to die. Andere als die gute fic!
" “I love you, Twilight Sparkle.” "
Killed the story for me
984298
Sorry to hear that. My writing quality is bad, I know.
986105 That has nothing to do with the writing quality. Its just the choice of words, the quality is fine.
*Read compassionately from the beginning to before the letters*
This seems like a good way to point out life.
*Reads letters*
...Wait what?
*Continues reading before that last few words*
Wait...
*Reads last sentence*
*Heart skips a beat*
HOW CAN SHE DO THIS!?
978005 Immortal doesn't mean bulletproof.
-John Carter
Good story by the way. It's very interesting to read what people feel goes through the mind of an ageless being, watching all whither and grow back countless times, seeing cycles repeat over and over. Twilight
wasis something special1176288
Thanks!
Right in the feels
Ouch. Well done, you got yourself some feels there
This was a beautiful piece ❤️
Loved the agent fluffy reading