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P0nies


Just here to read, and write, some FanFic. I really enjoy this stuff, so if you ever need an editor I can look it over for you, just hit me up!

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Time Turner is honored with the charge of overseeing Ponyville's timed dancing event, and has always taken this responsibility seriously in the past. But this time a certain grey-coated pegasus has caught his eye.


A prompt given to me by: John H.

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Comments ( 39 )

Another story by our beloved writer P0nies.

I had an opportunity to read it before it was posted here :twilightsmile:

I love it! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

What a wonderful story to read. The slight twist at the end was marvelous. You have a wonderful talent! :twilightsmile:

Great wee story, and I'm glad I took the time to read it. Plus, I'm a bit if Derpy fan :derpytongue2:
I found one mistake though.

"He just felt at home, and was comfortable to the point where he could’ve easily fallen asleep in her arms."

Derpy has arms now?!

1510062 http://i.imgur.com/Ka4yR.png

the image is too big to show, so here. Yes, arms. Pony anatomy.

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I humbly admit I was wrong :rainbowderp: Then again, most mammals have elbows as their front joint, so saying they have arms should be the norm too.

It still sounds rather strange, but I guess it's more down to the general perception of readers rather than the writer. I shall spread the word of arms to everypony! :yay:

1509826 Hated the story that much? :derpytongue2:

What a sweet, sweet story!:twilightsmile: And the magic at the end... well, they live in a magical world. We tend to forget that.

1510574 naw man just me being random:pinkiecrazy:

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Clearly, none of those things are good enough to exist in a world that has this story in it. You just raised the bar for existence. :derpytongue2:

1512975 Ha ha thanks :twilightsmile:

:raritywink: looks like my prompts lead to good stories. Then again, I give my prompts to a good writer!

I don't dump ideas on just ANYpony. They have to be cool AND realize I exist. That's a tough standard, but P0nies passes both with flying colors.

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Hey, I meet those criteria!

1513400 Hey, you're a good writer too, my friend! And it's good to know I'm special :twilightsmile:

1513891 you say you meet those criteria? Then write a one-shot about Photo Finish taking in Featherweight as an apprentice photographer, and the hilarious hijinx that would ensue when she is shocked to find he doesn't "the magiks."

1513901 and how often does a guy write not one, but TWO of someone else's prompts????!?!!!?!

PS why not Ditzy Doo? And also, was not expecting Time Turner to actually control time in a Doctor Who fashion. made for cool ending tho. SPOILERSPOILER

1513937 Well, you do give me some good prompts :3 and I don't know why Ditzy, but glad you like the end :yay:

1514023 It's a shame your story wasn't read by too many peeps. It's the perfect one-shot romance between a popular pairing of ponies used in Doctor Who crossovers, and even with using his canon name his abilities closely resemble Doctor Whooves in spirit. I figured people would be all over this like flies on a McD's burger.

1514036 I'm not all that popular, ya'know, but I wanted to do something that was somewhat canon but had a twist.


Dat burger...

1514045 what aspect of that story was canon? I'm actually asking le serious question, because it's late and I may have missed something.

1514057 I was meaning like going with the canon Time Turner, instead of referring to him as Dr. Whooves, since in the character list he is labeled as Dr. Whooves. Not much of a canon thing, but I didn't want to label him as Dr. Whooves because I wanted to characterize him differently. if you get what I mean, of course.

1514077 oh yea, dur.

1514083 I don't understand one thing though, is why you thought for some reason that people would be all over this. I mean, I'm not all that popular.

1514098 Because they should have looked and seen it then say "oh hai it's my favorite two characters because I read these Doctor Whooves stories like they're going out of style" then they read it and go

Dawwwwwwwwwwwww

1514114 yeah, but I'm just your average, run of the mill writer here. One thing with stories that does tick me off is how the populars, like shortskirts, is guaranteed a feature no matter what story that they write based on the fact that they have 1.5k+ followers.

1514128 true! there are writers who get auto-fav's.

What you need is a runaway hit. Something that grabs people's attention by the throats. Like a door-to-door salespony tries to sell life insurance to Celestia, and hilarity ensues. (because in theory only the mane 6 should know how old she is)

1514224 yeah, I guess that is what I need. But features are a rare thing for me, at least I have my treasured regulars here :heart:

Damn it! You gave me diabetes when Derpy accepted his dance.:raritycry: so sweet

This site is lacking in it's Doctor Whoover/Time TurnerxDerpy Hooves/Ditzy Doo lit. MY HAPPINESS WENT SKY HIGH, PERFORMED A SONIC RAINBOOM, AND BECAME 20% COOLER WHEN I SAW THIS. YOU MADE MY NIGHT. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

~Raxel~:derpytongue2:

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But thank you :twilightsmile:

1520145 I'm glad that I made someone's night with this, that makes me happy :pinkiehappy::yay:

1521052 It WOULD be nice if you wrote a second chapter to this, but from Ditzy's point of view! That would be even better!!

:fluttershysad: That is...if you want to...

~Raxel~:derpytongue2:

How the hell can you give my hopes up about reading about me!!!






ALONZY ALONSO!!!

1576183 Techically, it is about Time Turner, so yeah :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by SP00KY NINJA-PON3 deleted Apr 23rd, 2013

1576393 Oh Time Turner's just my new John Smith!!! and-OH DERPY NOT PEARS OH N-*Let the bonks commence* I HATE PEARS






ALONZY ALONSO!!!

Aw, this is such a sweet story. This will always be my favorite shipping pair. :heart:

A nice, sweet little story. One thing to be careful of is the slip into present tense towards the end; it's quite jarring when the rest of the story is in past tense. Overall however, I enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

This was adorable! :pinkiehappy:

Absolutely beautiful story! I loved it! Awesome work here! :heart:

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