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Tinybit92


Fangirl of Sunset Shimmer and Luna, sewer of fleece plushies, writes mainly oneshots.

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The Doctor is fascinated by this strange new species of ponies in this strange new world of Equestria. He wants to learn everything he can about them. You can't blame him for wanting to know how pegasus wings work, but you'd think someone his age would understand personal space.
Fortunately for him, Ditzy is very patient and understanding of his antics. Any other pegasus probably would have bucked him in the face for touching their wings without asking.

T for some suggestive humor. First-person, Ditzy's POV. Cover art is mine.
Not romance-heavy, but there's probably just enough to warrant the tag.

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Comments ( 19 )

Not a fan of the Doctor in Equestria, but I like these headcanons and the interractions between the characters you wrote.

This was a nice, cute little glimpse into Derpy's life living with a Madpony with a Blue Box. Very well written and perfectly in-character for both. Well done! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Nice story! Liked favorited, and I will feature it on the blog I work for. :pinkiehappy:

This should have the romance tag. :trixieshiftright:

And I doubt the Doctor would ever say 'dunno'. :trixieshiftleft:

Love this story. :raritywink:

BRD

More plez. :pinkiehappy:

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That was brilliant, the doctor sounded just like Tenant and while Derpy (Ditzy what have you) had a bit more vocabulary then most people give her credit her for I find the change rather nice. I look forward to reading your other stories.

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I didn't initially think it needed a romance tag since it's just sort of one-sided internal gushing on Ditzy's part, but you're probably right. Unless anyone else objects I'll go ahead and add that romance tag. Thanks!

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Yw.

I know Ditzy. :trixieshiftright: She does love the Doctor. :trixieshiftright:

Rarity approves of this story. :raritywink:

And this is exactly kind of story that made me love Doctors fandom.

I need to also prise your writing style. It's surprisingly good and your stories draw.

This is such an adorable story!

i was expecting ditsy to go pompf at the doctors touch. what happened?? I guess pompfing comes later.

 I'd bet that the earliest members of your species probably had to focus the magic themselves to fly

Would that include that Commander Hurricane fella?
Does that also include alicorns, seeing as how they're 1/3 buffed-up pegasus (at least, that's how I understand it)?

Did Celestia and Luna have to 'learn' how to filter out this attention drain, since they don't experience evolution (evolution takes place over many generations, so any one organism cannot really experience it; they do, however, encounter mutations, which is the basis behind evolution)?

D'awwww... Think my heart just melted. Really fantastic piece. I swear I was hearing David's voice while reading the Doctor's lines. Seriously, you were that spot-on with his character.

Usually Ditzy Do is depicted as having a sweet, but somewhat silly personality - acting clumsy, and oftentimes very clueless, but with a good understanding of the things that matter most, like kindness. :pinkiesmile:

This is probably the first time I've read a story like this, where I distinctly felt someone wrote her in a way that made her seem like a nice, normal, intelligent individual with an eye issue. I especially loved this paragraph:

He started rambling on about “innate energies” and “rapid evolutionary adaptation,” at a rate that I just couldn't keep up with. This sort of thing had made me feel a little stupid at first, as ponies frequently made digs at my intelligence based solely on my eyes, and I was a bit insecure about it. I had quickly learned, though, that nopony could keep up with the Doctor when he got like this. I just listened as best I could and nodded when it seemed appropriate.

This is such a great addition to the piece, because it really illustrates a developed understanding of Ditzy's viewpoint - more specifically, part of how she feels about others' perception of her appearance... even to the point of forming an insecurity where she's on the defense for when others make fun of her. Things like this go a long way towards making a character feel more real, and I always find it impressive when a writer comes up with a believable little detail like that... one that makes me go, "Wow. That fits perfectly and I never would've thought of it." :eeyup:

You also conveyed the Doctor's electrically energetic enthusiasm for learning nicely, and I especially loved the part about him reading stacks of books taller than him. :twilightsmile: This fic was written rather well. Thank you for sharing. :raritywink:

More?
Please?

I bet a doctor of horns would be a ‘corniologist’ or something like that (:
I very much so enjoyed the story, will there be more?

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