As Ditzy Doo does her daily routine of delivering mail, a run-in with a certain Colt leaves her more than she bargains for.
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Huh, Derpy Doctor Fluff. Don't see to much of that. Though the Doctor seemed to be moving a little to fast for comfort... Though then again with the possibility of Time Travel perhaps not.
Yeah I'm not sure what I'm saying either.
A bit straightforward and rushed for a first chapter, but good writing skills nonetheless
Curious to see where this one goes. Tracking.
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The story be marked complete :P
So. I see your a fan of the Doctor eh? mind taking a request? Here it is, do a Doctor x Twilight fic plz, we don't get enough of those.
Excellent stuff. It's just. . . waayyyyy too short.
5/5 for the quality, but it could use some quantity.
Cute! Could use a little editing. I don't mind that it's short; could use a bit more of a view of Doctor Whooves. All in all, though, it's way sweet -- especially her reactions to the unexpected compliments he gives her.
I approve...
>>sev62fmj
Oh. Huh.
I highly suggest that the author continue this chapter by chapter. I don't really count meeting a pony for the first time as shipping... that only works for
But this chapter seems like something you could build on.
Wow, thanks for the comments, everypony! I never expected his get so many views in so little time.
In truth, I don't really plan to continue this. It's just a short request I made for my friend, and it's just supposed to be a oneshot. But, if you guys want me to continue, then I will. Maybe, but it could happen if you guys really wanted it. Just remember to comment if you guys would like this to be a chapter story. If so, then chapters will be much longer.
Thanks again, everypony!
IT'S SO CUTE!!!! Shit, this is epic.
Ah seems like this is a one-shot. Good job! I'd hope there would be more but I guess not. :/
158883 please continue this!
Her name is derpy...:
>>tongen I am aware of this. However, this was written way before The Last Roundup, so I stuck with her name before she was called Derpy.
Thank you for your concern, though.
Short but very sweet.
After Shut the Blinds is complete, I want a novella outta this.
Great start; rushed into the relationship a bit, but great nonetheless.
While normally I'm a sucker for imagery & plot, you've really got a knack for dialogue that keeps me hooked.
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don't be rude!
I enjoyed this! Great job
No offense but this is too short to favorite. Like i said No offense I prolly couldn't write this stuff for my life. It was nice though. I would have liked it to be longer. Literally that alone would have done it for me. It was great writing. I felt cheated of awesomeness.
Adorable, soo cute it hurts ahhhhhhhh
Please write a sequel! THAT WAS SO CUTE!
~awwwww <3
Hiya! Awwww so cute! Great job on this! I loved seeing a little one shot of, yours truly, and Doctor Whooves. Keep up the good work! ~