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The Rainbow Blunderbolt


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This story is a sequel to Shut The Blinds


At the request of Twilight Sparkle, Spike goes on a hunt to find answers about the events that led up to the incident that left Rainbow Dash blind.

Sequel to "Shut The Blinds". It's not necessary to read that first, but it might be a good idea.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 49 )

Can already say that this is going to be amazing. Keep up with the great writing! I can't wait for you to finish this.

so spike begins his tale of thrilling horror and stuff.

still think he should have a blue suit, cigarette and a dark blue blancava(?)

Welp, I'm excited as fuck

Excitement all around.

Oh god, the irrelevant, pointless and quite frankly rather stupid plot point from the last that we'd thought had been avoided has its own sequel...

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blancava

Is the word you are looking for maybe baklava? As in the mask? If not my bad.


[Story talk]
Well, looks like you finally got to start on the sequel. Looking good so far. I wanna keep an eye out and see where this goes even though you don't even want to write it.

2310414
yeah, the mask.

2310468 Well, there would be your correct spelling then. Just wanted to be helpful.:twilightsmile:

Yay, sequel time! J'adore! :pinkiehappy:

Yay! I was hoping I would be able to hear what happened with Spike or at least see some form of continuation to the plot! Looking forward to see where this goes and I REALLY want to know how Celestia reacts to Twilight going against her wishes!

2309545 It still has been avoided! Do you know how? Don't fucking read it if you're not interested that's what. There is no reason to put down a story because YOU aren't interested in it.

2309545
If you don't like something don't look at it


I quite like the original story, and I'm sure to like this one too.

YEAH! WHOOHOOO!!! FINALLY! Now, I need to read the other 2 million words in my "Read Later" category:raritydespair:

After all, it was something of a gift from a…friend.

i cant wait for the time where you reveal what that "gift" is and the role that plays with the story i know its gonna be huge :pinkiehappy:
All aboard the hype train, its gonna be a fun ride everypony, thanks for continuing this universe Rainbow :heart::yay:
i´m glad for finally joining the ride since the beginning :twilightsmile:
P.S. Did i smell conspiracy, betrayal, and awesomeness in your story? :rainbowderp: i think i do :twilightsmile:

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee was my entire reaction to this chapter, so glad you did a follow-up to shut the blinds, was curious as to how spike managed on his own

Your beloved tyrant is back.

2309019 Thank you very much! I'll certainly try my best.

2309077 Hmm...perhaps that's a good idea. Heh heh heh...

2309082 And there was much rejoicing.
*muffled yay in the distance* :yay:

2309248 :pinkiehappy:

2309323 :rainbowkiss:

2309545 Well, to each their own, I suppose. But, and I say this in the nicest way possible, if you don't like it, then I suggest you don't look at it to avoid unnecessary disappointment
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2310414 Thank you very much!

2311176 Merci! :pinkiehappy:

2312315 Woot!

2312942 Well, then I would have to say you're in luck! Thank you!

2316594 Thank you!

2317581 Ha ha, happy reading.

2319855 :trollestia:

2322086 Oh, it shall indeed. :moustache:

2322371 Conspiracy yay! :yay:

2341729 Thank you very much!:scootangel:

You cancelled it?! WAT?!:pinkiehappy:

Can't wait for more, and don't dare doing that sort of things like that again, you hear me!

So, after a week or so of waiting, I finally got this thing done. And you all thought I cancelled it. :trollestia:

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Guess what new show I found?
BBC'S SHERLOCK MUTHAFUCKAS. Benedict Cumberbatch is so perfect I can'tnbslkagdl\askfgdksaj\ncblkjszgfclk\asbhf

Also, I love writing gore. It's so much fun. I should do it more often. In fact, I plan to...this is what I get for watching Elfen Lied, Higurashi, and Umineko. Hahahahahaimgoinginsanehelpme

Anyways, enjoy.

loved it! This makes me interested to find out what is going on and what Spike is going to go through. I know he comes out ok at the end but I'm still scared for the litt.. *thump* for the guy.

Damn, you killed him off quickly didn't you? Ah well, can't wait to see Spike kick their asses somehow. :rainbowdetermined2:

Yes, this story is definitely gonna get more and more interesting, I can tell.

What he got lost then eaten?

You missed an if.

You should also use different words than blob and glob, they seem very...childish.

Elfen, Higurashi and Umineko? good animes, and quite the good inspiration for this story as dragons where portrayed as savages in the show :pinkiehappy:

the conspiracy is strong in this one and i love it :pinkiecrazy::heart:
rest in piece dragon whose name we don´t know this seems apropiate so i´ll just leave it here...

This is interesting so far, I look forward to seeing where you take it.

I AM SO SORRY. This chapter is immensely late and I have no excuse for that. But, who looks at this anyway?
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(WARNING: THE IMAGE IS FUCKING HUGE.)

I'd rather a good chapter done right and late than a shitty chapter done early.

And of course, a chapter done at all is better than a forgotten fic.

~Skeeter The Lurker

This is a bunch of filler-ness, so...blekwnf;kwehfl'kdsbgjfkas
I'MSORRY

I can't say when this will be updated next, but I'll try to get back to a regular schedule, or as much as I can. School is coming to a close, and you all know what that means. FINALS! My PAT's are really important, so I have to hit the books. Or maybe I can just read them. You know, whatever works. But, this story isn't dead, and I don't think it'll burn out anytime soon.

Thank you for being so patient!
If anyone actually reads this.

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I read it. Nice to see it update.

TAke your time on updating... Especially if you've tests coming up. I dunno about anyone else, but I can wait for the next chapter.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Fillllllllerssssssss, not bad.

2367749 Spike is a child though. "Blob" and "glob" sound like words he would use anyway.

Also this chapter feels a bit off. It's certainly interesting, but it feels like the story totally changed themes on some level here.

I'm happy to see a sequel , Rainbow need some closure.
There is one thing that I think is strange though : You set this up as Spike telling his story to his friends , yet you adopt an omniscient point of view at some point. Spike shouldn 't know how the first dragon that helped him got killed given the fact that he wasn't here to see it...or am I misunderstanding something ?

WHAAAT? The sequel of my favorite TwiDash has been out for MONTHS!?! I hate you Fimfic, no notifications whatsoever, and as for the 400 followers, you DESERVE them.

I... NEED... MORE!!! :flutterrage:

please update...

Comment posted by The Rainbow Blunderbolt deleted Dec 27th, 2013

Before I start to read this I just want to say: YEEEEEIY, YOUR BACK! I'm so happy I could cry!!! I am crying!!! BEAR TEARS!!! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!

Btw: FIRST!!!

We must have more....the inspired one must FEEDS usssss~!

So yeah more chapters basically.

I can easly see this turn into a spike x garble:/

I'd have bet that the dragon that burned Dash was the dragon from "Dragonshy" & was looking to burn Fluttershy for revenge from being Stared. As to it being F's fault that D got burned, I would ask D to recall
1 Who annoyed the Dragon by kicking it in the face, thus forcing F to act?
2 Who dragged F up the mountain against her will in the 1st place so that F was there to save D?
In short, if it was that Dragon my question to D would then be You SURE you don't want to rethink the question "Whose fault is this?"?

But, clearly, I'm WAY off base here.

So, I'll still close w the comment that I'm moderately surprised F hasn't tried suicide from guilt.

Why do I get the feeling that the Dragon Empire is in the middle of a Civil War and the dragon they're going to see is some sort of warlord?

Also:
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In this chapter, a dragon gets himself killed for no apparent reason.

Is this story still going?

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Same question... Remember reading the first story and then when Fimfiction used to e-mail update notices that there was a sequel... Couldn't wait to read it when completed but it hasn't been touched for almost 2 years.

Will this be completed or forced to go into eternal hiatus?

I do not see a derpy pony,
I see Derpy, a pony.
One day I will figure out how to get a sig on Fimfic.

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Nah nah, it's not dead. It's resting.

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