For four thousand years a legend has been told of how the first dragons got their fire. Little did they know the legend is true. Five thousand years ago a being took residence in the Draconian Mountains. It called itself Yolstrun, a Fire Elemental. Dragons tried to drive it out, but failed. The Elemental seeing as they had no defense mechanism for protecting themselves pitied them and gave them the gift of fire. With this new found ability they were feared throughout the land. The Royal Sisters, Celestia and Luna, leaders of the ponies have had enough of them and used the Elements of Harmony to seal the Elemental inside the Volcano of Goraag, Capital of the Dragons. With their leader defeated the dragons were scattered throughout the lands and turned into mindless beasts, except for those who remained faithful to their leader and stayed in the mountains. Now the seal they put on the volcano is weakening and the monster they thought was gone forever is returning.
Hey guys Draco here. Other tags include Sci-Fi(You'll see why). Here's a new story for you guys and this time it's part of a series of books I'll be doing in time. So enjoy the story guys. If anybody wants to be my editor just PM me and we'll see how things go. Constructive criticism is allowed, but no hate comments
One thing I would suggest to improve this story: Slow Down.
Hmm.
7205813 What?
7205841 I'm just thinking about this chapter. It is puzzling me a lot.
7205857 Yeah sorry 'bout that I just came home from vacation and I still feel seasick. My mind was fixed about finishing this chapter and didn't think straight :P
7205859 Ah. I see.
7206422 thanks for understanding
7206442 your welcome
Interesting..... Has great potential, however I would advise you to slow down a bit.
7289477 thanks, but since my summer is almost done the stress of going back school is getting to me and thanks forte follow and fave as well
Can you do more
7360598 yes but it may take some time since I'm not allowed on my laptop on school days and I'm busy working on other projects as well
Also thank for the fave
7005908 <<<<<<this man has much wisdom you should listen to him
Plz more this looks good.
7382682 it might take another 3 days because I have school right now
7384029 ah.
XD
Great story so far! I can see this will be amazing if it will be continued!! Will it be continued???
7587016 it will be continued. I just don't have enough time for it
Fantastic!!! But it's ok, I can wait. So no need to rush!
7587093 thanks for understanding
No problem!
i like that you included both of my oc´s i love your take on arkas and arkus
7677961 it would be fun if arkus threatens arkas and then arkas throws a pancake and then arkus races after it while breaking the sound barrier.
Yeah don't wanted spike go to war
7677991 Lol XD
When is the next chapter coming out?
7871996 it will come school has just been dragging me down a lot lately
More?
8237696 There will be more. I'm trying to find time to write when I don't have school.
8241490 Its alright I understandthe struggle
Where next chapter buddy
Hey...this is pretty good!