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Rainbow Dash visits Twilight at the library for a clean up, as time passes will their minds go free?
Or will someone resist, Twilight for sure will let her mind go free.
As for Rainbow Dash, she will be confused by it.

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I kinda messed it up with the spacing... :\ :facehoof:

Remember kids = rape is fine if you drug your saliva.

Did Twilight rape Dash??

:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

20450 By the looks of it, yes... :twilightblush: :rainbowkiss:

I don't know if I should laugh or cry...

:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

20532 Maybe both, 'lol' :ajsmug:

20565

Ok then both it is. but I am not have Anypony get raped in my story. LOL

20594 I can lol at that :rainbowwild:

#9 · Nov 2nd, 2011 · · ·

Rainbow Rape lol :rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

Should I be crying as I just read Rainbow Dash get raped by her best friend? Or should I be laughing my ass off because Rainbow Dash just got raped by her best friend?

Oh come on, it wasn't exactly rape.
After all Rainbow Dash DID enjoy it!:rainbowkiss:

Luna approves. Though some development would be much appreciated.

36106
That's the spirit, as long as you are good at it it does not count as rape.

Uhh...

This is really old.

Is anyone still here?

Edit: Read the story, through the whole thing I was like:

What the hell?

Oh dear merciful Celestia, I was imagining this in my mind. Oh the sexyness and the horror. :rainbowlaugh:

Too little plot development, the wording in places could use a bit of work, Scootaloo's presence in the story seemed to have no purpose whatsoever,and way, way, way too much saliva. :pinkiesick:

It went to fast and I think you could've not added the Scootaloo part also Twilight seemed a bit OOC. Sorry, you get a dislike but the one thing you could do is maybe someday rewrite it.:duck:

:twilightoops: If this action got any...saucier...this would have to be mature content.That was on the line!

SOUND BARRIER(sorta OK, needs more imporvemt

36106 :facehoof:

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noun
1.
unlawful sexual intercourse or any other sexual penetration of the vagina, anus, or mouth of another person, with or without force, by a sex organ, other body part, or foreign object, without the consent of the victim.

The comments on this story are hilarious! The story though? It isn’t sexy, has no plot, too much focus on spit, and all three characters were OOC at least a bit. Also, why did you put Scootaloo in there? Without a plot she’s useless, and you have none

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