Rainbow Dash performs yet another legendary Sonic Rainboom and becomes a hero.. or does she?
A/N: Big thanks to TAW, and my sister Twilight Clopple for editing!
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I'm not sure that's happy... But good it was... But very sad... Good, but sad.
I've gotta say AB, you've got a heck of a lot of talent for writing sad stories.
But I don't think this is your best work. It feels unresolved.
But even your worst work is worlds away better then most other authors, keep it up!
(and you got your sister AND TAW to edit for you?! I'm so jealous
)
That was unexpected as frack. Nice job.
The idea you have here is brilliant actually. I really felt for Rainbow at the end there when she found out about what really happened that day. It's a shame that the story never really set the mood for me. It just moved to fast for me. Had this been a bit more drawn out I think it would have done more.
Keep going, you're doing good. You have a knack for writing sad and dark stories. I look forward to more!
~Have a good one.
This story just sucks! Rainbow Dash tried with all her will to save Rarity! She was a hero but sometimes hero's don't always save the day you kinda destroyed her I feel disgusted.
TLC is your sister?
luckyyyyy...
btw awesome story. third one i ever cried while reading along with My Little Dashie and The Night That Never Ended. Have all my internets.
Awww, I wanted a happy ending
You owe me a lovey dovey muchy romance story to lift my spirits again
Well, I must say:
What I initially though was going to be a slightly generic, unoriginal idea, instead turned out as a wonderful story!
I liked this one, and though I agree with some of the comments above (namely the ones about your pace), your still learning.
Just keep doing what you love, and great things will happen.
~Syn3rgy
PS: Not to mention your one of the luckiest authors out there, as TC is your sister, and she knows TAW, who only gives a select few editing help (Lets not forget TAW is the most watched user on this site). I'm jelous.
Right in the feels
Wait, Twilight Clopple is your sister?
Wow... and nice fic btw.
Very very well done! Original and not at all what I was expecting.
You have a gift, use it wisely.
YES dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
I am left speechless. Curse you and your sister at your abilities to write tear jerkers..
Applebloople, this is TC, you left your account logged in and I just happened to walk by...
Should I leave a comment about the actual story? Yes, yes I should.
Good work, I'm happy to see this up.
Have this, because fuck you, that's why:
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Me gusta.
Awwww I loved it! So sad!
The next one better be a comedy. Just kidding but this was very good. Feels, feels everywhere.
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that was sad. 
"If only I wasn't such a narcosis, I wouldn't have basically murdered myself and the Wonderbolts."
but, but...
marshmallows bounce.
Oh my goodness I loved this story, really sad ending. Though I must say I was a bit confused then everything started to fall into place. Applebloople, I am so glad you took the time to write this story, I love it so much. I really look forward to what ever you have planned next. Please let it be another sad one, please, they are so good.
1164118
Hmm. I was going make a really long comment, but this is scarily close to what I was going to say.
Minus the rainbowpie. I was just gonna think that...
I'm lazy dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
Nooo! the sads, they have meeeee!!
and they're slimy...
interesting idea, but it feels like it needs a fuller conclusion: as is, it just feels cut off prematurely
1167762
read this comment for a better ending
1164118
1167827 (((Opinion Alert: prepare shields)))
I read it before posting my comment, and I disagree on 'better'. More complete, yes, but it changes the pace of the story too much to really fit well with what is already given, and it shifts the resolution much farther than is needed, while introducing an unnecessary relationship with pinkie completely out of nowhere, adding exactly nothing to the story
(((Opinion Bombardment Complete: enjoy your day)))
1167910
Well, the relationship with Pinkie was 'technically' still friendship, but yeah, it was totally unnecessary, I just added that last line because RD and Pinkie go so well together in 4o2.
The 'better' was only referring to the completeness, not the story itself.
Thanks for the reply!
...
I honestly don't know what to say about this...
1169260 sorry to unload on you like that, your comment just struck me as kinda rude
i will agree that PinkieDash is up near the top of my favorite pairings though
1171711
No problem at all, I can take criticism like a man. Now please excuse me while I go to the store to buy a couple more boxes of tissues, another gallon of ice cream, and some light bulbs.
1167910
For your age: great job!
Would be some kind of odd if you were even better in writing sad stories, yet.
Oh, the potential. It's gigantic!
dunno if i should thumb up or down ... i still fave it, because its not bad written ... anyway, i thought i was ready to read something sad, but not something this heart crushing ... poor spike, poor RD, poor ponyville
i'm not happy that i read it ... maybe that's the problem
really good job bloople... but this hits more than i thought... really sad story
first thought when i saw TAW: omg, clop?