Whatcha Got There Cozy Glow

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Cozy Glow has opened a lemonade stand by suggestion of Twilight. Her techniques for reformation are gonna need some work.

Featured on 4/23/22

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My name is R

My name is R #1 · Apr 23rd, 2022 · 4 · 4 ·

Did you consider adding a profanity tag? I was rather put off by the multiple counts of swearing in the first 300 words, and surprised at such vulgarity.

ShadowblazeCR

ShadowblazeCR #2 · Apr 23rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Ah, yeah I’ll add that. Had it Teen rated because of that, figured that was enough to infer that it would be content that would need the rating.

Shakespearicles

Shakespearicles #3 · Apr 23rd, 2022 · 9 · ·

Whatcha Got There Cozy Glow?

... A smoothie.

My name is R

My name is R #4 · Apr 23rd, 2022 · 4 · ·

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Thank you.
At first the cover made me think that Teen came from some rather questionable sales practices. Buy the lemonade or I blow your brains out; Buy one lemonade, get a deadly weapon free; Ect.
I make Teen stories without profanity, it’s hardly the only cause of a Teen rating.

Samey90

Samey90 #5 · Apr 23rd, 2022 · 4 · ·

And here I thought she peed in the lemonade. Also, the story felt kinda, dunno, underdeveloped? It didn't even start for good and then it was over.

ShadowblazeCR

ShadowblazeCR #6 · Apr 23rd, 2022 · 3 · ·

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Yeah, I’m gonna be honest I threw this together to try and break through my writers block I’ve been on for the last few months. I felt like I just wanted to get the joke across and not have it get old, you can only threaten ponies enough until it gets annoying ya know. It was really based off of TomSka’s literal drink video. So, nothing too in depth to flesh out.

Wild Stallion

Wild Stallion #7 · Apr 23rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

"You going to buy some lemonade right?"

Only if you throw in complementary hugs.

Griseus

Griseus #8 · Apr 24th, 2022 · 2 · ·

I laughed out loud.

WindigogoGadget

WindigogoGadget #9 · Apr 24th, 2022 · 1 · ·

The thumbnail makes me think Cozy Glow is dealing weapons alongside the lemonade.

WindigogoGadget

WindigogoGadget #10 · Apr 24th, 2022 · 3 · ·

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BUCKING CALLED IT

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #11 · Apr 24th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Very 4chan.

Super Trampoline

Super Trampoline #12 · Apr 24th, 2022 · 11 · ·

I've never seen a story so perfectly capture this energy:

Sollace

Sollace #13 · May 2nd, 2022 · · ·

Seriously, Twilight Sparkle had all the power in the world and was likely literally the smartest pony on the planet, and what would help stop Cozy Glow seeing that it wasn't a war crime the first time; selling lemonade.

Um... What? Am I reading this correctly? Because I cannot tell what you meant for this to say.

ShadowblazeCR

ShadowblazeCR #14 · May 2nd, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Yeah, I could have worded that better. But the idea was "what would help Cozy Glow become reformed?" and since I suck at grammar I just threw in a semi-colon instead of a question mark or restructuring the sentence and the answer was supposed to be "selling lemonade".

Sollace