Metamorphosed

Thorax fears Queen Chrysalis is starting a new hive and planning on attacking his, he asks the mane six for an impossible tasks, but Spike and the CMC decide to take the spot, but the decision will change them and their lives forever

Story request by: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/288987/chazkopa

Art by: https://www.deviantart.com/bokkathfoxrabbit

Story is based of of a comic chazkopa commissioned.

Grammar fixes done by: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/322554/damiranc1

Changeling cmc and spike: https://www.deviantart.com/bokkathfoxrabbit/art/chazkopa-Request-Changeling-Apple-Bloom-823471689

https://www.deviantart.com/bokkathfoxrabbit/art/chazkopa-Request-Changeling-Scootaloo-823471634

https://www.deviantart.com/bokkathfoxrabbit/art/chazkopa-Request-Changeling-Spike-823471476

https://www.deviantart.com/bokkathfoxrabbit/art/chazkopa-Request-Changeling-Sweetie-Belle-823471588

Link to comic it's based on: https://www.deviantart.com/bokkathfoxrabbit/art/chazkopa-Request-The-Change-page-1-817710892

Chapters (5)

A proposition · 19th Aug 2021 · 996 words
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Incubation · 18th Sep 2021 · 1,198 words
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(Ch 2.5) Voices and movements · 18th Sep 2021 · 208 words
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A New Home · 1st Oct 2021 · 774 words
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The Battle · 11th Oct 2021 · 604 words
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ChazMLPFIM

ChazMLPFIM #1 · Oct 12th, 2021 · 1 · · The Battle ·

Awesome.

Chrysalis laughed evilly as Spik laid in a pool of blood

You miss the word 'Spike' with an E.

The Sandwich Guardian

The Sandwich Guardian #2 · Dec 2nd, 2021 · · · The Battle ·

Good start so far, hope to see more

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #3 · Jan 26th, 2022 · · · A proposition ·

Thorax tinted a bit and rubbed the back of his head with a hand,

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #4 · Jan 27th, 2022 · · · (Ch 2.5) Voices and movements ·

This is short because it is a chapter that the requester wanted, and I could only do so much with it.

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #5 · Jan 27th, 2022 · · · A New Home ·

It has been a month since the Crusaders and Spike entered the pods, late in the afternoon of the final day the pods burst open as the Crusades and Spike laid in a pool of green slime. Spike and Scootaloo were holding on to each other tight as they slowly woke up to see the mane six and Thorax staring at them in awe.

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #6 · Jan 27th, 2022 · · · The Battle ·

Chapters could be longer. Aim for 1k to 2k long chapters.

NotSuspicious366

NotSuspicious366 #7 · May 9th, 2022 · · · Incubation ·

The cmc and Spike start to get in their pods, Scootaloo goes in first. "I should tell you after the pod closes it will fill with liquid, but try to remain calm you'll be able to breathe in it." Thorax told Scootaloo as she stepped inside, the little liquid that was in there was between her toes and felt warm to the touch, and a little slimy, as she leaned back the pod began to close and her heart started racing, she could feel every beat and almost hear it. Before the pod closed completely she let out a scream.

Her TOES? And also, what kind of liquid is this?

NotSuspicious366