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Licensed Real Estate Agent & Notary Public. I also really love magical girls.
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Let’s get this stuff out of the way:
Aside from your normal grammatical mistakes (which don’t bother me too much), and some “Men writing women” paragraphs; most egregiously this one...
This story was really good. I could totally see this being an introduction to a much longer and more epic Western-themed story. I liked the character’s personalities quite a bit.
It makes me want to write my Cowpony Guitarist story again.
This is what I call a good western story here! Call me interested! I even like the style of guns you have Celestia carryin'
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Thank you for both the praise and criticism. Obviously this is something totally different from what I usually write, I never thought I would write an "M" rated story to begin with and I wanted to see how I did writing something with actual violence and a slight bit more sexuality. Although there's a reason there isn't a Sex tag up there, it won't get explicit.
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Thank you! Plenty more to come.
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I look forward to what is to come! I always enjoy a good western. And I'm also a firearm collector
What will happen next with Trixie?
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She will be seen again...
Oh my... this was... I have no words but I hope that this wretched cold-blooded outlaw is caught or shot one day!
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While I'm more a fan of the classic John Wayne western I also wanted to show the influence of more brutal western movies like Unforgiven and The WIld Bunch in my writing. And Sunny Flare is also partially based off of El Indio from For a Few Dollars More along with some others.
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Of course, I mean any good western's gotta have an outlaw gang with cold-blooded behavior. Plus, I find Indigo favoring to use a raiper a very clever and unique idea
Sunny Flare is such a magnificent bastard that I kind of like her.
Not her behavior, obviously, but I like her personality.
This was an intense chapter, wagon train stories are always intense. I sure hope everyone else is okay.
And boy the ending was very satisfying to me.
Excellent story you got going ther .
And excellent plot
I actually love Pinochle.
This chapter is very interesting, especially Twilight’s character, she’s irritable and whiny, but it seems exactly how Twilight would act.
Also, the stories are starting to connect, which is pretty cool.
I was actually liking Zephyr. You just had to kill him.
A good gambling chapter, pardner'.
And good selection of characters for it too.
I admit, the gambling stories may not be my biggest part in westerns, however there are some I still enjoy, like with Bill Hickok, and Faraday from the Magnificent Seven. And now this one
Wow! Just, wow! This chapter gave me huge Zorro vibes. And I shouldn't known Indigo wasn't the only sword duelist in this story
I love how this description seems to imply Rainbow Dash is either trans or constantly wearing a corset, and honestly, they both make an equal amount of sense.
Anyways, Rainbow Dash is a fancy sword duelist. I don’t know if she’ll ever get Indigo, but swordfighting is very much something Rainbow Dash would do because she thought it was cool.
I'm nervous going into this... Don't anthology fanfics always go on forever?
Jesus, those damn cold blooded Shadowbolts are causing Rarity problems too?!
Okay, my hatred for them has escalated to "I want them drawn and quartered".
But I do give Rarity a good points for getting that wretched man out of her sight to defend Daffodil
Rarity is a badass. It’s a shame that the Shadowbolt Gang follows her around wherever she goes.
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This fic will be twenty chapters. Consider it a season of a television show.
The plains of the west is indeed very cruel sometimes
So you’re telling me that Applejack Got Lost.
I love this chapter, and I’m so sad for Diamond Tiara.
So, This happens. I'm not sure if I wanna kill or just cripple that moron now
Trixie really just rolled a Nat 1 for intelligence and a Nat 20 for persuasion.
Wow, Flim and Flam are freaking masterminds in this story.
Well, this was an interesting chapter. And it confirmed a personal opinion I had for a long time
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Thank you, what would that be?
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That Applejack is one of the quickest draws around.
Do I see some Startrix on the horizon?
Anyways, it’s quite interesting to know that they’re all going to meet up in Appleoosa.
Oh boy, Sounds like the next part ain't gonna be all too well.
Celestia tracking down Luna in a Western AU? Hell yeah.
Poor Trixie.
Oh man and Zephyr was just so cool in this too, fuck.
(Sighs) this is getting better and better.
How you gotta treat my girl G like this. Still a damn good chapter, getting closer to the end.
Oh boy...
If something bad happens to Diamond at this point I'd be sad.
I was worried about Chrissy. Poor Thorax.
Another grand chapter!
Finally started reading this one after catching up with others. Oooooh boy now I can't stop singing Big Iron
Lookin forward to more, pardner!
I love the open ending.
Also, I can totally see Thorax crossdressing, I don’t think he’d hate it though.
Aww yeah everything's coming together.
The plot is now tied in.
*nods* God made man, Sam Colt made 'em equal.
That said, Doc Holiday was a legendary quickdraw and an equally lousy shot, such that basically none of his confirmed kills were the guy he was actually gunning for at the time.
Oh boy oh boy we're nearly there I'm so excited.
Finally, it's over. But what will happen next? Who knows?
The duel turned out how I was expecting it to. Such a shame for one of my favorite characters, but what a damn fine story.
What a finale. But what happened to Twilight and her family?
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They were part of the homesteaders from Canterlot mentioned at the end of the chapter. As for them specifically they're fine, the family survived the encounter with the Buffalo Men and got back on their way.