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like fresh out of the oven!
This is in the clop group but the last one wasn't, is there going to be clop in most chapters or is that just in there for a few future scenes?
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Honestly, i kinda forgot to add it in the Clop group. However, there will be more explicit content; it's just not going to take the driver's seat.
Just so you know, the word I should always be capitalized. Please respond to this comment.
Dude, you have no idea how much I've been looking for a nice MLP fic featuring anthro ponies, usually I just rather read clopfics but this, this just caught my attention. And wow this story is so good than I expected! The setting is very interesting, and even though it's darker you're using it pretty well, way better than other fanfictions that are way depressive and violent.
And I just noticed that there will be some hot stuff in this story, which I am so looking forward for this >:3
But the point is, I really like how you're doing it so far! I mean, I didn't read the older version of this story but I can say your writing is pretty good, I really enjoyed the prologue and I see that there will be some kickass action in the story, which is also one of my favorite things to look at!
Seriously dude, you should keep working on this because I LOVE IT! And I'm sure I will love it even more when you post more chapters of this! For that you have my greatest support!!!!
Oh and I want to give you the extra points for the hat, the tree and the town clue! I exactly know what those that mean but I'm not gonna spoil! XD
Please tell me this is going to see a continuation? It's goddamn promising, and I don't usually go for stuff that pits the good guys against each other (actually, I usually bail the moment that happens).
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Believe me, I want to see more of it and I'm sure the author is doing the best to continue. Last time I heard about him life is keeping him busy, but now I'm getting concerned since he's been inactive for months.
I hate to say this.....but it doing good so far. I did read your original story “The World They Once Knew” and while I was reading that I did not think it would have been cancelled (just found out a few hours ago after finishing reading it today). So disappointed it was cancelled
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Anyway, hopefully you’ll at least think about continuing this one some more. I really like how this all started and leaving everyone hanging (which is great by the way) is an awesome cliffhanger for the next chapter. It is excruciatingly sad that some of these great stories go unfinished
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Good luck and I hope to see some more chapters soon
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Keep the story going
almost 3 years...
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Huh, didn’t think there would be anyone still interested in this series.
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... if you look carefully you will see that there are 34 who liked your story
yes well
so will there be more?
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Maybe not this book specifically. There is a ton of HiE stories out there and at this point its akin to a drop of water in a bucket. But i would be lying if i said there was no interest in writing at all.
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So should I take that this story is canceled?
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Sadly all sources point to yes. But, there is something I have been working on since I have more free time than I know what to do with.
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Oh okay ... look maybe it will seem like I'm a jerk but you could at least have the decency to classify your story as canceled since you confirm that there will be no more chapters.
you know for those followers.
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Hmmm... very well. If there are still those that follow it, i may as well fix this.
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thanks for your time with me
sorry if i was rude
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Nah, its all cool.
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At the very least, it shows people are still interested in my stories.
Happened to fall on this story recently (that means yesterday
) and I can say that it looks pretty good already. I like how this story is heading.
By the way, are the Ponies here likr standard Anthro (hooves from the ankles & down, while the rest having pretty much a human like body, minus the head, plus wings, fur & tail) or did you decided to do some thing a little different?
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Essentially Vanilla anthro... for the time being. I could make some unusual biological quirks just to throw Cassius for a loop. Just have it like "Cassius, why are you freaking out for? Everypony knows that Unicorns fart sparkles. That's just basic biology, why are you being so weird about it?"
"Sure is Zarbon in here..."
Man, you have no idea how happy I am to see your story again. I had to re-read all over again to remember how the story starts. Now I'm getting so excited about what's gonna happen next. I feel Cassius' frustration because Twilight is not letting him tell the truth, and that's not gonna help when the truth comes out eventually.
I have a question, is the story gonna feature future clop scenes? And will Cassius get his own herd?
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Pretty much. The tags are still up and though it may be a bit before anything on-scene lewd happens. But yeah, this is a poly-questria setting so it'll happen, and with the obvious crew. Though... just not as we know 'em.
Good to hear from this story again!
this story is quite interesting the plot hooked me
Out of curiosity, in the likely case that Cassian's herd is made up of all 6 names, they might also have mares like sunset, starlight, or females non-Pony Girls.
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It is something i had considered. Didn't want to make the herd too big but then again, i made no secret that the gender gap is rather large so casual hookups could be a thing for these ponies.
How is it possible for the protagonist to be scandalized by a piece of clothing? How old is he, 9? and then ask the girl protagonist if she have ever be with a boy?
Please tell me it won't be like those movies where the girls do everything and the boy is in the corner with his pacifier in his mouth terrified of bad people.
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I have no problem with who is or is not in the Pack if you tell me that girls like ember can't be there I will not question it although I would ask for girls like sunset or starlight but they are minor things
First off, great to see this story continuing. Secondly, am I imagining it or did this story from the previous two chapters change? Was Daybreaker also a main villain in this story?
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Indeed. I've done a lot of revamping and thinking since the old rendition. I kinda wanted to make Nightmare Moon a more intense threat instead of having her being one and done defeated in the span of two chapters.
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I see, I can understand that. Again, it's great to see this story being continued. I hope we can see more chapters in the near future?
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I'm almost done with chpt. 4. Just doing some rewrites and grammar fixes here and there. May end up being a bit of a long chapter.
Imagine if the story just end, like right now, with all this premises and world building to beeing made and have have you invested, just so the main MC just wakes amd with all that just being a dream of his.
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That'd be the biggest Dick-move i could pull. Honestly, throwing away months of plotting and planning for a laugh... does sound like something I'd do tho, but i've invested too much into this fic.
Great to see the latest chapter!
Brightmac's reaction was intriguing, I wonder what happened that caused him to say AJ, his own daughter, was "nobody?"
Hope to see more of this story soon.
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I'll be picking this up after we're done with the holidays. Christmas takes a lot out of people and it took a lot out of me.
It has fucking risen!
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I LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVE!!!
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HE LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HELLSING ABRIDGED REFERENCE SPOTTED!