Happened to fall on this story recently (that means yesterday ) and I can say that it looks pretty good already. I like how this story is heading.

By the way, are the Ponies here likr standard Anthro (hooves from the ankles & down, while the rest having pretty much a human like body, minus the head, plus wings, fur & tail) or did you decided to do some thing a little different?

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Essentially Vanilla anthro... for the time being. I could make some unusual biological quirks just to throw Cassius for a loop. Just have it like "Cassius, why are you freaking out for? Everypony knows that Unicorns fart sparkles. That's just basic biology, why are you being so weird about it?"

* Tokusentai!~Tokusentai!~Tokusentai~! * The song lyrics play out as they each strike a pose, and it took every bit of strength Cassius had not to break out in a mix of laughter and cringe himself to death.

"Sure is Zarbon in here..."

Man, you have no idea how happy I am to see your story again. I had to re-read all over again to remember how the story starts. Now I'm getting so excited about what's gonna happen next. I feel Cassius' frustration because Twilight is not letting him tell the truth, and that's not gonna help when the truth comes out eventually.

I have a question, is the story gonna feature future clop scenes? And will Cassius get his own herd?

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Pretty much. The tags are still up and though it may be a bit before anything on-scene lewd happens. But yeah, this is a poly-questria setting so it'll happen, and with the obvious crew. Though... just not as we know 'em.

Good to hear from this story again!

this story is quite interesting the plot hooked me
Out of curiosity, in the likely case that Cassian's herd is made up of all 6 names, they might also have mares like sunset, starlight, or females non-Pony Girls.

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It is something i had considered. Didn't want to make the herd too big but then again, i made no secret that the gender gap is rather large so casual hookups could be a thing for these ponies.

How is it possible for the protagonist to be scandalized by a piece of clothing? How old is he, 9? and then ask the girl protagonist if she have ever be with a boy? Please tell me it won't be like those movies where the girls do everything and the boy is in the corner with his pacifier in his mouth terrified of bad people.

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I have no problem with who is or is not in the Pack if you tell me that girls like ember can't be there I will not question it although I would ask for girls like sunset or starlight but they are minor things

First off, great to see this story continuing. Secondly, am I imagining it or did this story from the previous two chapters change? Was Daybreaker also a main villain in this story?

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Indeed. I've done a lot of revamping and thinking since the old rendition. I kinda wanted to make Nightmare Moon a more intense threat instead of having her being one and done defeated in the span of two chapters.

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I see, I can understand that. Again, it's great to see this story being continued. I hope we can see more chapters in the near future?

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I'm almost done with chpt. 4. Just doing some rewrites and grammar fixes here and there. May end up being a bit of a long chapter.