Raymond Dallas, a short, senior college student, gets caught in a dare with his two roommates, which he lost, making him take yoga class dressed as a girl with a rainbow wig, a pair of cyan blue wings sown to the back of the shirt, and a rainbow tail sown to the rear. He was embarrassed that he was taking that class, but things went so wrong during the class, he actually changed genders, name changed to Rainbow Dash, and nobody around him seemed to notice. Not only that, but his entire life was being rewritten, and he was the only one to know about it. And it turns out that the woman next to him during that class became his/her mother, and de-aging him back to Junior Year in High School.
Then when "she" arrived back at the apartment he stayed at, it turns out that he still lived there, but with "her" family and foster sister living there instead of his two roommates for college. "She" was trying to figure out what was going on while the reality around her was slowly changing around her. Especially when her own body was changing to one that's not human, but an anthro pony, but still aging like a normal human. Will Raymond/Rainbow find out what's going on with the help of "Rainbow's" six best friends; Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Sunset Shimmer, which they had an answer that "she" was not expecting.
Next chapter, ex-Raymond have another revelation;
Rainbow Dash (ex-Raymond): OMG! I have to re-do my college!
Even from reading the description alone, I can picture Twilight grimacing at it.
Here's the original picture to show you what I mean:
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will wait one more chaprter but not sure on this sotry
Then... what happened to Rainbow Dash's supposed memories? If it really gone, then Raymond would be in really trouble the coming days.
By the way, you call her an anthro Rainbow Dash but I do not see any muzzle and especially wings on her. She sounds like an anthro Earth pony (even if we dismiss the muzzle that would separate anthro from human) than a pegasus.
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Just wait. The transformation's not done yet.
The mystery deepens
"We just want to know if she's okay and see if she remembers us."
That's not gonna happen
Keep up the work!
So doing yoga in that yoga clothes seemed to trigger the transformation. Now that the physical part is complete, let's see what we gonna do for the memory part?
yeah I am done. this is just unnesseciarly mean
Great story and keep it up. I do have some constructive criticism though. When you talk about your adopted sister. You can just say sister. That’s what people say.
OK, that explains much. I've thought about reality merging idea before and it seems I was right. Now the question is where the Rainbow Dash's self be? Because it does not look like Raymond has an identity disorder or flashback or something.
Sooo, is he really Rainbow Dash or there was a problem with the spell? Im confused.
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You'll see.
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The Legendary cliffhanger strikes again
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true.
Great chapter, and its gonna get interesting!!!
Keep it up!
With my child
What? The whole 18 years of Raymond only last a month in Equestria? That's even more than Sunset's world. Come to think about it, currently Rainbow/Raymond probably know more of Sunset's world than Equestria.
wow, that was a twist!
Keep it up!
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Technically, 22 years. Raymond was a college senior.
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Then, the following scenario is possible.
[Sometimes after RD regain her memory]
Rainbow: I cannot believe I was a nerd on the other side! My awesome athlete history is ruined!
Twilight: Rainbow, a college graduate is not a nerd.
Rainbow: Same thing!
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That gives me an idea for a future chapter. Thanks.
I would change Chrysallis's text color, black blends in too much for people reading in dark mode
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So everyone?
Great chapter!
How comes it was so easy to go to alternate realities? If Chrysalis was that genius in magic, why didn't she invent spell that help changelings collect love remotely?
Took her 10 seconds to remember what is the priority at the moment.
I hope so!!!!!!
Keep up the chapters!
end of the line for this particular thread or is a continuation/sequel planned?
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Not really. Sorry.
it feels rushed now.
Please continue it.
Not a bad ending, but it did feel a bit rush. Maybe extend the part where Rainbow help ex-Alice cope with living as a pony? Maybe Alice's transformation scene? Since Rainbow already took a couple chapters with hers, it just felt fair that we should get Alice's as well. The last couple paragraphs can be put into separate epilogue chapter.
I'm confused. Is RD an EqG human or anthro?
A story sounding this good deserves more than 20,000 words. Over 90,000!!! or more Sounds about right.
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I found something. Took about 2 minutes to find and reply.
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I agree please make a sequel