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Naruto and Sunset have ended up in late 1800's America. There Naruto is found by Theodore Roosevelt and became his ward. And Sunset ended up becoming the daughter of Barbie Norton. Now years later Naruto becomes a government agent along with Kurama in protecting their new home against threats from other worlds.

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I get it with U.S.A President Theodore Roosevelt, but Barbie Norton? THE Doll Barbie?! She will be the Adopted Mother to Sunset?!

That's a first. :rainbowhuh:

Also, since it's the late 1800's with the near ending of the Wild West. Then Naruto and Sunset will probably have to deal with WW1 and WW2 back to back. And possibly the Cold War/Korean War/Vietnam War as well, if they both have a Very Long Lifespan!!!!! :twilightoops:

This fic is on Fanfiction.net already Iā€™m just making some changes so that Sunset appears earlier in the story.


I look it up. And it's nice you have a Fanfiction Account. And I still like to talk about a real life Barbie here. And Naruto and Sunset dealing with WW1/WW2, and Possibly the Cold War/Korean War/Vietnam War, etc..

But, I want to talk about something personally. I DON'T like Two of your Stories only! Firstly, your first story about Sunset having a Monster Girls Army with the power of a Rat King or Dungeon Master. I don't actually hate the Monster Girls. Their are Very Hot Bimbos Furries! šŸ˜»

But it's WHAT they did in the First Chapter that pisses me off. Mainly Raping the Main Six, and Celestia! I get Celestia kinda had it coming. She was a Bad Mother and didn't treat Sunset right. And DIDN'T help Luna with her issues. Thus causing her to turn into Nightmare Moon. And even went Xenophobic/Racist against the Monster Girls by attracting the Pony Stallions more??!!! I think Celestia and the other Pony Mares are just FUCKIN Jealous of the Pure Hotness of the Monster Girls. And Celestia kinda deserve that Bad Karma.

But being Rape, and FORCED to be a 'Cow' to Sunset is frickin Disturbing. And I like Huge Tits and Lacation! But me being disturbed while reading Sunset using her own Mother as a "Magic Battery" is very concerning and Fucked up for me!

And the Mane Six? What the HECK! I get it that they used the Elements and attack Sunset, Nightmare Moon, and the Monster Girls. But, they didn't know any better. And were Manipulated by Celestia. And while Twilight being a Teacher's Pet is terrible on itself. And she needs to be helped and snap out of it. And 'probably' deserved that mess up raping orgy. As well with Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack. Considering they are arrogant bitchies. BUT, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity!!!! WTF!!!! Do they really deserve that!!!???

Even Darkman agrees!


The Second Story, and the MAIN one that I DON'T like and probably Hate! Is how you handle the WH40K Universe! And Celestia's OOC Arrogant and Egotistical BITCH attitude!!!! The Primarchs and EVEN Ham/God-Emperor Of Mankind ( Despite his Terrible Many Glaring Flaws) DOESN'T deserve that!!!!!

Celestia is frickin Naive and WON'T Win against Chaos and the other Xenos!!!!!! Will she 'really' make peace with the Four Chaos Gods, the Chaos Space Marines, Daemons and even the Traitorous Chaos Primarch Princes. The Orks, and ESPECIALLY the Tyranids, and the Dark Eldar. Maybe the Normal Eldar, Tau, and possibly the Necrons in a 'good mood'? Maybe. But the others and beat them all????

Laughing at Celestia's Pure Idiotic "Peaceful Galaxy" Dream!!!!!!!! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild: :trollestia:


I DON'T F****** THINK SO!!!!!!

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And Janny092 that greatly explain this as well in your Fanfiction Website:


As for this Commenter:


Please DON'T listen to him/her! I don't like having Celestia be drugged, and even Rape Ham/God-Emperor Of Men or something? HELL TO THE NO!!!!!! Ham SHOULD be the Dominant ONE!!!!! And show Celestia the REAL Power of MALES AND HUMANITY!!!!!!!!! šŸ˜” šŸ˜” šŸ˜ˆ šŸ˜ˆ

And the Chaos Gods AREN'T Cowards and P******!!!!!!

Plus, Celestia and even Sunset WON'T Fuckin LAST FIVE SECONDS to the Four Chaos Gods themselves!!!!! Sorry, but they are WWWWAAAAAAYYYYYYY out of their League!!!! And will truly Scar both of them Physically AND DEFINITELY Mentally Tramitazed for Life!!!!!!!!

True but the monster girls I'm using are from the japanese games Monstergirl Quest and Violated Hero series. The monster girls raping the heroes is what happens in those games and what I'm doing is actually tame compared to some of the stuff that happens in those games.

As for in American Fox Barbie is based on the dolls and I mean dolls. And was adopted by real life Emperor Norton the first emperor of the united states. Look him up.

OK that was cool

is this a rewrite?

adding and fixing things

I'm rather surprised by how much the Barbie character has grown on me, especially with these revelations about exactly how far reaching her other identities are.

Where was the Jonny quest reference?

The rock man Hardrock

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