Soarin Skies expects nothing from life nor from those around him, nor from himself. He has fifteen years-old and is impervious to everything. Yet his family expect a lot for him and he has to succeed if he wants to honor them. This is why he joins the prestigious Crystal Prep High School where he meets Rainbow Dash, a gifted girl who thinks everything's so easy that nothing has a taste anymore. A bond is going to weaver between them and gets stronger and stronger, until the night where Rainbow Dash is going to confess...
(Okay, you have to activate your suspension of disbelief here to imagine Dashie as a gifted in, em, mathematics, but once that's working, I hope you're going to be able to enjoy this story 
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TO BE PUBLISHED ON SATURDAYS AND WEDNESDAYS UNLESS NOTIFIED OTHERWISE
I still think this story doesn't quite fit in with the site, but as I haven't anything else to publish and it's been going on for too long, I've decided to keep on publishing it after all. Trigger Warning in some of the chapters.
hmm looks good so far, I’ll be waiting for the next chapter
My favorite paragraph
Best part is "You're a damn dead tree!"
Well, miracles can happen
Him? "No longer breathing"?
What IN THE WORLD happened between these two?
More teachers like Cadance, please!
Oh, poor Pinkie
I think I'll be feeling like her very soon 
Keep it going! This is already pretty interesting!
So many questions and not enough answers... And it's the third chapter! So great, keep it going!
So true. This is some hell of a useful advice for teenagers. Really knocks a lot of sense into the head.
Does the word "broken" rings a bell, Dashie? What are you hidding?
I'm crying
Pinkie is such a wonderful girl, she doesn't deserve half the sh*t that idiot puts her through.
So much to take in... And, oh, it's raining
Oh, this chapter was lovely
Well, when they were bonding over Little Women. Pinkie still has a long way to go, but Dash surely will help her a lot to have a little confidence on herself.
I'm not confused, you're confused
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Dude, I swear, I didn't expected that Soarin's parents lied to him about Dash, and that Windy lied to Dash about Soarin, I feel like that Soarin's parents and Windy agreed to get them away from each other.
Knowing the plot, I can understand why Soarin's parents did it (although they didn't have to do it and they were assholes to do it) .... but why Windy?
canceled? why?
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Unfortunately, from the very beginning, I wasn't very enthusiastic about posting this story here. I found it to be too serious and depressing and to be honest, I started to hate that story that I've rewritten over and over again. Plus, readers don't seem to particularly like it neither.
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To be honest, it's written in its entirety. But I really felt that this story didn't fit well with the site.
BUT since now I have difficulties writting new fanfics because I'm much more focused on my original work, I could un-cancel it, in order to have at least something for my followers to read...
I'm SO glad this is back, Ni! Thumbs up for making up your mind to continue, this is already quite amazing!
(Dash please fix your socks lmao)
Those last few lines gave me chills. What do you mean a taste of blood?
I love how both Soarin and Dash are just bored with life. Bored with everything. That I can relate to
I can't help but to feel really worried reading "Then, some people would better make better choices. Because it can bring consequences that aren't always good for the persons around." It speaks in VOLUMES that there's something going on in Dashie's life
Great chapter as always my friend!
"I'm sure someday, someone will write a poem about this face." This phrase is honestly so beautiful, I aaawwwwwed at it
Dash daydreaming about Soarin's back
I love Dash's repulsion at acting like a sappy teenager 
Also, I am now hating Dash's stepbrother even if we know next to nothing about him, but I can imagine what's going on here...
Wonder when the hiatus will end, and how much longer it is overall, if there's any more coming (I know you said the story is complete, but I wonder if that means it's all posted, or if it's just all written and there's still more coming).
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Basically, there's more coming but I'm too busy lately... plus the story doesn't seem to interest a lot of you and never gets a lot of views so I'm slower than I used to be!
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Well if it helps, this story has gotten more views and likes in the almost two years since this has been posted than most stories have gotten in years.
Ooo. Nice start. This is exciting. Hope to heard what happens next.
I was wondering why i liked this story so much! You wrote 'a story of love among others' I loved that story and love your writing style!
I would pay to see this finished
pleasssssse update thisssss its sooooooo good
i like the start of this, it seems promising.
also, that is the best way to start a journal lol
i love your descriptions theyre amazing
interestingg i cant wait to find out more
i didn't expect pinkies pov but this is pretty interesting and i like how you've written her character