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TheMareWhoSaysNi


When the legend becomes fact - print the legend. (Specialist in AU stories)

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Soarin Skies expects nothing from life nor from those around him, nor from himself. He has fifteen years-old and is impervious to everything. Yet his family expect a lot for him and he has to succeed if he wants to honor them. This is why he joins the prestigious Crystal Prep High School where he meets Rainbow Dash, a gifted girl who thinks everything's so easy that nothing has a taste anymore. A bond is going to weaver between them and gets stronger and stronger, until the night where Rainbow Dash is going to confess...

(Okay, you have to activate your suspension of disbelief here to imagine Dashie as a gifted in, em, mathematics, but once that's working, I hope you're going to be able to enjoy this story :twilightsmile:)

TO BE PUBLISHED ON SATURDAYS AND WEDNESDAYS UNLESS NOTIFIED OTHERWISE

I still think this story doesn't quite fit in with the site, but as I haven't anything else to publish and it's been going on for too long, I've decided to keep on publishing it after all. Trigger Warning in some of the chapters.

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 23 )

hmm looks good so far, I’ll be waiting for the next chapter

Oh, I know what you're thinking.... You've got an IQ of 169 and you're starting a diary? Such a young genius can't be writing this nonsense of diaries, this is good for spotty brats dreaming of the football team's quaterback. Well, you know what? Screw you! And what do you know about that, uh? You're a damn dead tree!

My favorite paragraph :rainbowlaugh: Best part is "You're a damn dead tree!"

One last thing I have to tell you in case you're expecting smashing teen drama... I'm already dead inside so life is meaningless for me. And it would take a miracle for me to come alive again."

Well, miracles can happen :twilightsmile:

Him? "No longer breathing"?

What IN THE WORLD happened between these two?

Out of all the classes of Mountview High School for Boys, she had been given the worse one. And to say she had been valedictorian of her university... If she had chosen Mountview it was in full consciousness, precisely because she had the desire to make things change for the better. Just like in that movie, The Blackboard Jungle . But she had to state the obvious - it wasn't easy to make things change when there was no will for it. And movies were just that. Movies. Fiction. Nothing to do with reality.

More teachers like Cadance, please!

Oh, poor Pinkie :fluttershysad: I think I'll be feeling like her very soon :fluttershyouch:

Keep it going! This is already pretty interesting!

So many questions and not enough answers... And it's the third chapter! So great, keep it going! :twilightsmile:

"Aren't you able to understand who you are? If you always rely on what the others could be saying about you, you'll never get anywhere in life. Stop acting like a faithful puppy or a poor abandonned kitty and try to interrogate yourself. Are you living your life on behalf of the others?"

So true. This is some hell of a useful advice for teenagers. Really knocks a lot of sense into the head.

"I know I'm not very smart. I probably don't deserve that a girl as gifted and sharpsighted as you could be interested in me. But I'd like to try anyway. You know, I can see you and sometimes, you look so sad. It makes me feel sad as well. It's as if something terrible has happened to you. As if you were... broken."

Rainbow Dash was stopped in her race. The saying "still water runs deep" came back to her mind. Pinkie Pie indeed was naive, and rather silly, but she could see things with her heart. This realization moved the depth of her soul.

Does the word "broken" rings a bell, Dashie? What are you hidding?

I'm crying :fluttercry: Pinkie is such a wonderful girl, she doesn't deserve half the sh*t that idiot puts her through.

So much to take in... And, oh, it's raining :fluttercry:

Oh, this chapter was lovely :rainbowkiss: Well, when they were bonding over Little Women. Pinkie still has a long way to go, but Dash surely will help her a lot to have a little confidence on herself.

I'm not confused, you're confused

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Dude, I swear, I didn't expected that Soarin's parents lied to him about Dash, and that Windy lied to Dash about Soarin, I feel like that Soarin's parents and Windy agreed to get them away from each other.
Knowing the plot, I can understand why Soarin's parents did it (although they didn't have to do it and they were assholes to do it) .... but why Windy? :rainbowderp:🤷

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Unfortunately, from the very beginning, I wasn't very enthusiastic about posting this story here. I found it to be too serious and depressing and to be honest, I started to hate that story that I've rewritten over and over again. Plus, readers don't seem to particularly like it neither.

This...is...beautiful *pulls out tissue*

"What? You read that... in only one weekend?"

I could read at least 5 thick books in a weekend (not to brag) when I'm super focused

"Come on, Dashie. Let's go."

C'mon, do Windy Whistles have to ruin the moment?

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To be honest, it's written in its entirety. But I really felt that this story didn't fit well with the site.
BUT since now I have difficulties writting new fanfics because I'm much more focused on my original work, I could un-cancel it, in order to have at least something for my followers to read...

:yay: YOU DID IT!

I'm SO glad this is back, Ni! Thumbs up for making up your mind to continue, this is already quite amazing!

(Dash please fix your socks lmao)

Those last few lines gave me chills. What do you mean a taste of blood?

I love how both Soarin and Dash are just bored with life. Bored with everything. That I can relate to :rainbowlaugh:

So far so good!

I can't help but to feel really worried reading "Then, some people would better make better choices. Because it can bring consequences that aren't always good for the persons around." It speaks in VOLUMES that there's something going on in Dashie's life :ajsleepy:

Great chapter as always my friend!

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