Chrysalis Tries To Hire An Assassin
Little does she know that someone else is looking to hire this same individual for an entirely different purpose.
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Settle it in Smash, eh? Sure, why not.
Hm
Health bars in Smash? Interesting new mode instead of pure Stamina, but I'll roll with it :P
Enjoyed this little piece though.
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Knowing the show's naming conventions, it could very well be Street Fighter, Mortal Kombat, or anything else. Maybe Ryu or Johnny Cage is actually named Falcon Feather or something.
Not bad story, but there are some annoying bugs here and there in it.
Huh... so, I really liked this story, got a good laugh out of me... but I can also imagine an alternate way it could go where neither Chrysalis nor Thorax ever actually realize their mistake - Chyrsalis is eventually driven off at BH/F's casual indifference, maybe even preference, for wiping out every single "bug" and then Thorax comes out, thinking it was just a bluff to scare Chrysalis off, before BH/F says something that inadvertantly gives Thorax the inspiration he was looking for and he leaves, satisfied while BH/F is still just sitting there, confused out of her mind.
I don't know if that'd be even better, not as good, funnier, not as funny... I dunno, but I'm curious what other people think. Either way, love the story and... i don't know why, but I really like BH/F and wouldn't be opposed to seeing more of her.
"I threw a slipper at the first one, decided to roll with the second."
she is a braver person than I am, I'd probably be breaking out the Ortho, chemical sprayer, and backup flamethrower
I really thought she was an exterminator. Kinda funny that I was as lost as the changelings. Fun littler story by the way.