Ruby Rose, the young prodigy from Vale. Onyx Shinra, the fourth heir to the Shinra Corporation from Atlas. Sunset Shimmer, the fiery Fox Faunus from Vacuo. Eclipse Khan, the Tiger Faunus anarchist who seeks redemption from Mistral. Together, they will form Team ROSE, to fight the evils of Remnant, orchestrated by the wicked puppeteer known simply as Ozma. Can these children defeat an opponent who is the literal master of the Grimm?
Current Artwork from SinoBice. The best artist to work with for any RWBY artwork.
Previous Artwork from amalgamzaku
Author Madforce Entertainment.
Chapters (12)
If Ozpin is evil in this story, then does that mean Salem is good?
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Yes this was an idea to make the story interesting.
Asking for feedback what did think of the story?
This looks very intresting.
I like your OCs so far and your few twist are creative.
I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
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Thanks. And I’ve got something big planned
this is going in my read later bookshelf due to my interest in what happens when i eventually read it.
also, i posted a couple of potential weapon ideas on your thread in the RWBY group asking for them.
Having actually read it now.
I will enjoy this.
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Glad to hear that thanks.
this had me laughing.
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Thanks man. But why did you sent this?
4 chapters, 3 teams assembled, 1 Jaune Arc probably still very confused about what Onyx said at the end of chapter 1.
i am a happy brony.
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Happy to make you happy!
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The show wasn't exactly as slow as it is nowadays when Monty was still alive and in charge.
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Yeah, and We been working on these chapters through 2020.
Her is my opinion, I think you are moving to fast in the chapters and the story, slow down.
There, better?
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I repeat, when Monty Oum was alive and in charge of the show, even the moments of down time were really fast for the time the show came out during.
Monty Oum was known for fast frantic action, i honestly expect the same out of anything inspired by his work.
Here's a question: HAVE YOU EVER WATCHED VOLUME 1 OF RWBY?
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Yeah thanks, the last one is out tomorrow I do hope you’ll enjoy.
I'm done with this story, bye bye.
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Hay Wait don’t go, I don’t want to lose any readers. Please stay.
Ok.
They missed the deadline but impressed thoroughly.
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Glad you enjoyed it. Always looking for feedback.
Will other OCs be brought in? I have several ideas for Semblances and weapons if that's the case.
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Always looking out for ideas, for weapons and semblances. Send my a PM.
Very very intriguing Ozpin/Ozma the big bad while Salem as the good person I look forward to reading more of this story.
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Thanks I’m glad you’re enjoying my story.
This will keep going.
The role reversal between Salem and Ozpin is interesting, I'm curious how that is going to work out.
You have given yourself a lot of characters to juggle - yes, I did just say that - but it's a decent start and it will be fun to see what you do with them all.
10831503 Glad you’ve enjoyed it.
I’m always looking for OC’s weapons ideas and more if you have any.
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Am I right that this Sunset is native to Remnant, not Equestria?
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Yeah she’s from Remnant, what did you think of her being a fox?
Weiss, Applejack, Vinyl & Emerald are going to be a team, Will I see this working fine
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Well I’m hope you’ll like the next teams.
I refuse to read this solely because of the name "Onyx Shinra".
😁
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Ummm, are you joking?
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partly. 😋
But that name is the weaboo edgelordiest name I have seen in a while. 😁
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I see, just to confirm. Are you going to continue reading my fic?
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Nah, I don't think this is for me.
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Okay, thanks for your honesty.
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I think Onyx Shinra kind of fits. Weiss Schnee I'm pretty sure is German for "Snow White", which is who she's supposed to be based on. Onyx as a color is really just another way to say "black", and Shinra, well, FFVII, just his side of the family so far doesn't sound like a bunch of assholes like the Schnees. Still, if a story doesn't do it for someone, then we can leave it at that.
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Thank Crow.
So... How's Twilight gonna approach Sunset?
Don't answer.
That would be a spoiler.
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You’ll find out more in the fifth chapter.
hmmmm. things are cooking big time. wonder how the next chapter will taste.
I like filler chapters like this most recent one.
They feed the soul.
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Thank, I was exactly aiming for filler. But I’m glad you enjoyed it.
this is gonna be fun.
this is so gonna be fun to watch.
... I feel no sympathy for Cardin.