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This story is a sequel to A Family for Cozy Glow
Cozy Glow, along with Twilight, goes to the Crystal Empire to see Flurry Heart, the ruler of the Crystal Empire. Feelings of love will blossom in the pegasus mare. The problem is that Cozy doesn't know how she will confess to Flurry Heart. Will she be able to declare herself? And will Flurry feel the same as Cozy and accept to be her marefriend?
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Cozy Glow.
Why are you posting post-season nine crap when you created this group dedicated to denouncing and rejecting season nine?
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Fixed it.
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Don't comment this sort of bs on someone's story. How would you feel if you worked hard to write something, and then someone called it crap, just because they didn't like the season? Don't be a dick, please. If you know you don't like season 9 stuff, don't click on it! It's really discouraging to receive this sort of comment, and can lead to people not wanting to write anymore, and it is nothing short of rude to try to make someone not want to do something they love!
To the author, I really liked this story! My favorite part was Twilight and Cozy Glow's relationship. You can tell they care so much about each other!
I love it
nice work
I just realize something
Cozy Glow is Twilight daughter
Flurry Heart is Shining daughter
Twightlight and Shining are brother
So that mean...
Uh oh
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Except Cozy is NOT Twilight's biological daughter. If she was, that's an entirely new set of horseapples. Now it's just weird.
10266898 what is weird?
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Because some might not look past that Cozy and Flurry are family, even if they're not related by blood. Ponies are stupid like that it seems.
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I liked the story, but to me, the dialogue feels kind of robotic. It feels as if I’m watching a conversation between npcs. It feels far too uncomfortable. I would personally give this 4/5. Good work!
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Even if some might have strong against something we still might make stories around that. I hate Twilight outliving her friends and created a group against it but I made one where she did.
I like the story idea but it says it's been twenty years since Twilight freed Cozy and adopted her. She and Flurry would have met much sooner.
Something is missing here as well, you never explain how Flurry became ruler of Crystal Empire. In my version Cadence got murdered along with Shining Armor. There had to be a reason for Flurry being ruler now.
Luved this story! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Another error I just saw is you call Cozy a pegasus colored mare. Do you mean pink? Peach? Pinkish orange? Kind of torn on her color.
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Sorry about the mistake. When I wrote that I meant she was a skin-colored Pegasus mare
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