Anon is full of turmoil. Fluttershy is there to help him lay his feelings bare.
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Not Enough Coffee
"The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts." ~ Marcus Aurelius
Not Enough Coffee
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When the story's feels got you like:
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I don't know what I expected from that image. Haha.
Aw that was sweet. Thinking of doing a follow up?
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Don't know. This was purely for what I wanted to express these past few days. As with my other stories that get sequels, I only write them when I know I can make it strong follow up.
You can cuddle with me any day, so long as you sign my no homo consent form.
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Sorry. I don't believe I'm straight enough to sign that form. Full homo.
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But I thought you were bi
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Are we cuddling or not?
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Lemme ask my parents
Honestly, I don't get it.
As for me, the demonstration of emotions is unacceptable, not to mention crying.
I'm a man, when I feel bad, it's just my problem and no one should know about it. I have to be strong no matter how I feel.
It's a nice story but II want to shout at him: GET THE FUCK OUT OF BED!!!
how do i say this with out sounding to rude i feal like this isnt really a full story i feal like this more like a mini chapter or a conversaion on a blog post
oo i think i got it why you made this you ware fealling down try to use you imagination to feel better if that the case i take back everything i said and hope that you will be happy soon
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Ty. And it is less of a story. In the authors notes it states it is an outlet for the ending to uplift people in a dark place as I was at the time of churning this out in less than an hour.
I merely wanted something to cheer people up.
This was such a nice story!
The power of kindness prevails.
I'm definitely going to upvote this, but I can't say I felt strongly enough about this to shelve it with other liked tales. Compared to your other Anon work, this one doesn't have the same strengths. Your author's note makes it clear that this is more of a vent fic, and Anon is a clear link between you and the audience who may feel similar. He doesn't have the same defining plight as the Chrysalis Quartet Anon that makes him interesting even if you aren't in the same situation. Either way, you continue to be one of the best writers for putting depth and effort in second-person and Anon-style stories.
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This story sucks, go away. Read better stories.
Thanks for the compliment on my second person stuff.
Edit: Yeah, I actually used my two brain cells on the other Anon second person stories. This one I shat out as something to make people feel better, cause it was when the big political situation was happening earlier this year.
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I only have your Thingpone story and your latest to read. And I'm gonna.
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Read my latest. Thingpone is a shitpost.
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Too bad, I read what I want.
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Only based if you become a new member of the swt and get way into the freaky shit like me, you know what I'm saying?
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I refuse to venture into the depths of your waifu boards.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Liked this story.
There's quite a few past and present tense mix-ups in the story as I write this. For example...
Just kinda work on that. I find that if it's a second person story, present tense reads smoother imo. It's ultimately your choice though, but do try and practice on this as it'll improve the quality of your stories immensely.
Should be atop.
Should be She.
This was a pretty good read. I really liked and enjoyed the interaction anon has with Fluttershy, and it leaves me wanting more of those moments.
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Surprised you'd chose to read this one out of all my stories, as I tossed this together quickly and with less care than all the others. But yeah, those issues you saw there are the result of that, and since they have been shown, might as well fix them while I am here.
Thanks for a read all the same. In this vain, I'd check out "Love Beyond What's Freely Given" cause it's the strongest, in my opinion, of my Anon centric stories. Otherwise my latest two are what have the most meat to their bones.
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Coolie, I was just scrolling through your stories until I saw Fluttershy, and chose this one because she's my favorite pony. Plus I needed a short, late night read.
I'll be sure to read more of your other works, too.
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Based taste. Flutters has grown on me over the years. Hard for me to personally pick a favorite from the mane cast, as they all have their moments for me. I'll be looking forward to your feedback! As you know, comments are the lifeblood of this site.