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Celestia has a disturbing revelation about the limits of alicorn mortality. With time suddenly turned against her, she must embark on a journey to find the source of her unrest: an ancient memory drawing her inexorably to a forest that time forgot.

Winner of the October 2019 Writeoff contest: "Crossing Over."

Edited by Miller Minus. He's a champ!

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Comments ( 4 )

You made me cry.

This was...oddly disturbing to me. Not quite sure why, but honestly this felt less...sad, and more like some kind of existential horror in a way I can't quite explain.

It's like...like they collapse deep into a singularity of themselves, and essentially become some sort of eternally isolated metaphysical black hole.

Maybe it's peaceful, but I can't help but see it as a kind of eternal loneliness.

This is beautiful.

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