Din Djarin was a well respected bounty hunter. Praised for his ability to capture his targets, he developed a reputation for being the go-to hire to ensure all debts got collected.
That is, until his target was The Child.
Now on the run from The Guild and its members, Din must play a galactic-sized game of Hide and Seek to guarantee the safety of his target-turned-youngling. When a hypersrive malfunction strands Din and The Child on a whole new planet in a different galaxy, he will soon discover Equestria is not the land of cupcakes and rainbows that it appears on the surface.
Chapters (4)
For the record: I know that is not Mando's helmet, but the visual effect was too good to resist
This should be a good read if you keep up on the quality. Well done.
Love it.♥️
This is The Way.
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This is The Way.
Looks like I am in for an interresting ride.
Is there a planned update sheduled?
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Considering the absolute clutterfuck I am in with as many open stories as I have? I'm going to try, for now, once every 3 months
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This is the Way
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Thank you!
I had exactly this same idea for a setup, except in mine, the Child and the CMCs use his force powers to raid Sugarcube Corner for sweets.
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That sounds like a nightmare for the Mane 6
Yes please let baby yoda in sugar cube Conner I wan tto see that happening.
...Okay, you've caught my interest. The science-y stuff you mentioned for how the ship's systems work also implies you know your stuff, so well done on that.
And this seems like a lovely resort. And Celestia is Sunset's mother? And Amethyst may be her and Luna's? Don't suppose we'll get any follow-up on that?
And is that Mage Meadowbrook or a different Meadowbrook?
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That is Mage Meadowbrook, and yeah, parental issues are going to play a big part
Y'know that howling joke in Zootopia? I like to imagine the Mandalorians are like that with that phrase, "This is the way."
Aaaanyway, I kinda skimmed over the second portion of this story. It completely ruins my immersion when characters — in this case, Celly and Woona — start conversation about things they would have talked about long ago. Exposition shouldn't be so painful and forced.
To combat this, without any novel-length guide to write, I'd advise that you leave little "crumbs" of exposition throughout the story, just hints. Or otherwise just find a way for the characters to deliver it naturally (like maybe a tourist pony asks for directions — "I'm sorry, I've never been to [location] before!"). Hell, you could even just straight-up tell us the details, if it doesn't rob the story of an interesting reveal. But a great guideline to follow if you want to be smoother about it is KEEP IT RELEVANT to the plot. (Maybe the tourist pony is a main character in that hypothetical. O.o)
There are loads of practical ways of delivering exposition. I think we're all afraid of it to some extent, but de-mystifying this aspect of writing can make it way easier and even fun.
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Thanks for the tip!
I cant with that title
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In a good way or...
I need more of this
I want more. Especially of the Mando and Baby Yoda
I like the story and where It's going, but can I recommend having Din Djarin not talk as much? He was never a sociable character and seemed to keep to himself quite a lot. It would be a good idea to turn most of his lines into just him thinking to himself, as it ruins the feeling of it actually being Din under that helmet. Still, it's a great start and I can't wait for the next chapter. You got this man!
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Fair, but in my mindset, he talks to the Child "off camera" as it were. And something like that happen, he would talk more to keep him calm
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I have been looking all over the damn place to find a story based around The Mandalorian.
Oh look, another mando story that has been abandoned.
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Nope, got an update planned for next month (I am a COVID essential worker... 'Nough said...)
Wait, he landed just outside of town and not in the forest, where he would get attacked by a manticore? Is that allowed?
Didn't expect Cheese. Or human Pinkie. Or a threesome. Or Cheese switching genders.
So, not sure I understood all the astrobabble. Does time pass differently between the two dimensions or something?
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That is actually canon from the EqG movies (mare Twi is her 20s, yet on the other side of the portal she is a high schooler). I just went with something that actually made sense in relation to planetary rotation
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No, I figured there was a time difference, I just never thought about the sort of astronomical mechanics behind it.
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You are welcome!
What's the wars has to do with the unequal gender ratio? I mean, if they continue to give birth at 1:1 ratio the older generation would just die out in time. It would be more believable to blame incompetent potion practicioners like Zecora.
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Nothing is ever 1:1, but basically they used magic to skew the ratio
Mood
After several months of inactivity the story had been derailed it seems.
The God-spirits want to turn him into a pony or something.
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There is a difference between derailing and plot building
Update?
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This is the newest update😂😂😂
Continue plz asap