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redsquirrel456


He who overcomes shall inherit all things.

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Deep beneath the mountain, Twilight must continue the great work. She has stopped for no one in many years. But perhaps she will stop for a friend. At least for a little while.

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Written within two hours for Everfree Northwest 2018's Iron Author competition.

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A very interesting story, I wouldn't mind seeing more of this

This was unexpected and creative.

Nice to see another IA story posted on the site. I posted my submission as well, as did DeltaSierra.

Dreadnought

Interesting. Almost makes the world feel a bit cyclic.

Friendship is Reality.

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Writing in this is just so good. From the visual imagery to Twilight trying to describe her overwhelming nostalgia. Love it.

A wonderfully evocative tale of gods at work. Part of me hopes Twilight would move on and forge new friendships rather than literally reforge the old ones, but this was still fantastically done. Thank you for it.

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I'm not sure if this is too spoilery but this story is vague enough that it seems many took different interpretations of it. For me personally, Twilight isn't truly recreating her friends per se, but rather the new incarnations of the Elements of Harmony, which have the side benefit of basically being her friends in a new form since they embodied the Elements in life.

I rather liked this, and I'm only sorry for not having read it immediately.

Oooo, this was really nice! It had a wonderful sense of atmosphere. Well done!

This story has a really good atmosphere, and lots of room for interpretation.

8990286

Think you'll make a comic about it? :rarity wink:

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Well now, you never know what surprises I might have up my sleeve. :raritywink:

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