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Smug Anime Girl


I sit here to smug at you, but not by choice

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Life after ruling for Celestia is boring, almost too boring. However, on one of her strolls, she comes across a lost runaway filly. It quickly becomes clear that there is more to the filly than what meets the eye.

This story has been submitted to CONTEST: Depth in Innocence

Chapters (17)
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Comments ( 106 )

This is very good

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Am I doing something right then? :D

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If this was the reaction you wanted.

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It is. Thanks for stopping by!

I am intrigued.

This should be a nice change of pace from what I've been reading lately.

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I hope you enjoy it! If you don't mind me asking, what do you normally read?

10075538
Honestly mostly romance and usually really, REALLY long stoties currently I've finished one story from the top 10 longest stories list (or at least whats currently there) and I'm about 700k through another one.

Funnily enough this is actually one of the three types of stories I usually like to read but it's been a while if you know what I mean

For reference (Romance, Adoption, Pregnancy)

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This just might be me not being here for a long time but I find pregnancy/adoption stories rather rare on this site. But I see.

This is a really good start! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Well i am interested to where this story will go.
I'm looking forward for it :twilightsmile:

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Thank you, I’m glad you like it!

Is this 'Andante' taking advantage of his daughter's young age and lack of a voice by taking credit for her creations?

This is cute, and overall very well written. Didn't really spot any mistakes either so that's good.

Actually how many of those transition images do you have I've noticed that they're all slightly different

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Thank you for your kind words.

And if you must know, I'm running out :trixieshiftleft:

This is...how do I say it? Delicious is probably the only word I could come up with to describe it. Yes, It's delicious to read.

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This is the absolute strangest way someone has ever complimented me, thank you for making my day!

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Is this 'Andante' taking advantage of his daughter's young age and lack of a voice by taking credit for her creations?

yes
It'll be covered later

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:pinkiehappy: Well of course I read the comments of stories!

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No it was just I didn't know what the comment was in reference to, if it was to the story's contents or comments or something else

None of this made sense, and not in the good way. You'll have to explain it too me before I give this story any more.

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It appears that you are the only person to have this problem, so I don't know what the issue is. When you give such vague critisizm, it doesn't help anybody.

Perhaps you should check this out.

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I'm not criticising anything about the story. And I will be ignoring that link as a personal attack on myself.

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So are you being deliberately confusing and annoying then? You’re just saying that it’s “confusing.” I could say that about you right now.

The train rounded the bend and let out two mournful toots of it's whistle. The rain was so loud that the train's hissing and screeching was nearly drowned out as it slowed down. Coming to a stop at the platform, the train let out a metallic clang. A small number of ponies got on, and a blue stallion and small purple dragon got off. Luna curtly nodded at Andante. "It's a pleasure to have you here. Your music is? quite enjoyable." She mentally winced at the awkwardness of that compliment. "And it's good to see you again, Spike."

"Well." Andante scratched the back of his head at this. "I belive that she should not be displayed to the Canterlot nobles as some kind of-"

"Just how much did those spoiled brats steal from my house?" Andante grumbled. Luna tried to react but was restrained by her Celestia. Spike, who overheard what he said, shook his head to himself.

Typoes

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See, this is the kind of thing that HELPS

Hey you know how the universe is a hologram and reality an illusion? Good cause you got reviewed!

I simply love this story, and you only leave me wanting more!

Yay! The true blue royal is in this story! None of that 'characterizing him by his mask' shit I see far too much of! Or worse, painting him as a villain! I feel so happy whenever I find a story written by someone who gets it!

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He's a public servant, not an idiot :D

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I like this version better.

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I'm glad you do, I just thought he had a bad rep and wanted to go against the norm.

Just read the redo. Nice. But I kind of liked her being adopted...

I just realized that the word counts of every chapter are perfect multiples of 100 what

I love this chapter! Moon fruit!? And my story is on the also liked list!? Okay, I shall give it a big star, and thumbs up, once this is done. However, I do not hope for you to feel rushed!

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Fair enough, but I wanted to have a buildup to it. I already revealed Andante in that chapter, so throwing an adoption in would also be too much. At least I think so.

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You know after the first two chapters by coincidence I got perfect numbers to the 100ths place and ever since then I've made it a challenge to keep it going

Nice done Reference to Miss Kobojashis Dragon Maid. I cant really getthename on that anime right *Shrugs*

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Kobayashi*

I think its something like the 8th most common Japanese surname

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