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"Inspiration does not come to the lazy. It only comes to those who call it." - P. I. Tchaikovsky

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Warning: The following story you are about to read is currently unedited. And although it does contain gay themes, this is not an M/M story. If anything, this has more to do with friendship than anything. If you don't like those aspects, you know where the exit button is.


On Hearth's Warming Eve, Braeburn asks Soarin to sleep at his home for the night. From there, the two of them start to catch up on many things of the past, their concerns about the present, and reassurance of a brighter future.


This is my humble Christmas present for my readers. And I hope that y'all will have a safe and wonderful time with the people that mean the world to you.

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Very nice!

I did find a few typos:

“Ah do.” He nodded. “If anythin’, Ah jus’ came back from a Hearth’s Warmin’ Eve party and it’s over. But…” another sip. “Well… if this sound’s intrusive on yer part, Ah get it, but… is it possible to be tonight? Ah don’t exactly wanna be left alone here.”

Unless Braeburn is secretly some celestial being I don’t think it’s possible for him to “be tonight.”

“But why don’t you go to Sweet Apple Arches?”

Is that like McDonalds?

“Yeah,” Soarin nodded, “it’s just… neither of us has done anything like this before, ya know? I don’t know if she’s ready to commit or if we had dated long enough to make that big of a leap. You might say that I’m just a bit is all.”

Just a bit what? Or like the currency?


Still, nice job. Thumbs up and favorited.

A lovelry story. I really enjoyed the read.

To the author - i think this is the first time i've seen you write a Christmas/ heart's warming story.
really excellent job!:yay: :heart:

p.s: on personal note i'm temporarily leaving fimfiction cause i can't stand the problems with my laptop any longer! still have iTunes id to deal with but that's okay i'll get to it eventually.
don't worry i have another laptop but it's an older model. so i will in and out from time to time seeing authors (who i follow and read posts on) just won't as present 24/7:)

Wait until Braeburn finds out that Applejack is a lesbian.

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