Chrysalis never thought Starlight Glimmer would offer to be her friend, so she accepts Starlight Glimmer's friendship and gains a new form of Changeling. Chrysalis is sorry for her actions, but the Changelings tell Chrysalis that she was only doing her duty as mother and queen of the changelings. Chrysalis decides she will live in Ponyville. Thorax accepts Chrysalis's decision, although he still thinks he isn't ready to be king of the Changelings.
Arriving in Ponyville, Chrysalis wonders with who she should live. Twilight offers Chrysalis to spend a day with each of her friends and with her, and who Chrysalis likes to spend time with, she could live with that pony. But over time, the friendship between Chrysalis and Twilight Sparkle may become something more.
It's a good beginning for a story. I think the Chrysalis change of mind was a little rushed, but is nothing we already haven't see on the show. Keep going, I'm anxious to see your vision of Chrysalis redemption.
lets see where this goes
Aw. If only Chrysalis did that on the cartoon show. She would join the ranks of Starlight, Trixie, and Discord.
Is always a pleasure to read more ChryLigjt stories :3
It's not a bad story.
But I have a personal aggreivance with ALL villains being reformed.
i love it and please make more chapters for this story
Not bad for a start. Though I personally think Twilight and Shining Armor would probably not be so quick to forgive. If it were me writing this I'd probably need some time, she'd need to do a few good deeds before I had them forgive her for turning Shining against Twilight. I know Twilight can be forgiving but she wasn't on the best of terms with Discord for a while. Your choice though.
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The story did say he was uncertain about that.
I agree on Twilight though.
When will there be a new chapter?
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When I have an idea of what the next chapter will look like
nice work on all chapters out so far