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This story is a sequel to A Gift To A Princess Holiday’s Heart
The new year has come in Sunset’s World. Twelve new months, a lot of things can happen this year. Sunset’s first activity she wants to do with her friends is what she calls snowball warfare. Tons of her friends are invited and it wouldn’t be a new year’s celebration without the Princess Of Friendship.
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This is grammatically incorrect. It should read;
And drop the Oxford commas while you're at it.
9926247
I don’t know what Oxford means. It’s one of those words I never heard of.
9926306
Oxford is a town in England.
9926312
Do they have Warfares similar to this expect more dangerous?
9926330
Oh dear.
An Oxford comma is a comma which's usage is not needed. The comma in the third sentence of your long description is one such comma.
9926346
Do you think I have to remove it?
9926348
It'd flow better grammatically, and remove the 'a' before 'snowball warfare'.
9926363
Okay, what did you think of the story?
9926507
An interesting take on a fading pastime.
9926521
Thanks. I always try to do that.
9926524
No probs.