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Nonchalant


Road work ahead? I sure hope it does!

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Sunset Shimmer knows she deserves worse than Fluttershy. She knows Fluttershy deserves the world. They have each other, though, which they both want to think is enough. That doesn't mean it doesn't hurt, and six weeks can be an awfully long time...

A submission to Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest: Endings, whose name I strongly believe should be "Sunset Shimmer Summer Shipping Contest"


Shoutout to Lex, fourths, and the associated server for providing feedback throughout the writing process!
Cover art edited by me, vectors found at the links below. If anyone knows of a better way to provide credit, let me know!
Fluttershy Vector
Front Sunset Vector
Back Sunset Vector

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 12 )

Really loving the dynamic between Shy and Sunset so far. The underlying tension between them is also deliciously executed. Can't wait to see how this plays out.

Ooh, this is an interesting start, and I look forward to seeing where you take things.

Is equal to velocity

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Thank you! Feedback is always appreciated. I'm a little new at this. I'm glad you're enjoying it, though!

great chapter! :) and I love how Applejack's profile name is just Applejack

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fun little background detail I had in mind: The reason it's "AppleJack" rather than "Applejack" is because Pinkie Pie has a few extra accounts, and "Applejack" is one of them. It's being held for ransom, though for what has never been specified.

One chapter left!

Sadness supreme :pinkiesad2: great chapter

Well, that encapsulates many unhealthy relationships quite well... I would love to see Fluttershy's side of this (since Sunset is... an unreliable narrator), and the ending has me curious for an epilogue... Do they end up platonic healthy friends or is it just awkward for eternity?

Good stuff. Well, bad stuff but written well but not that I think your story is bad just that the content is bad --n NOT that I think you have bad content because this is --- never mind, you know what I mean. :fluttershysad:

Have an upvote.

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Thanks!

As for an epilogue... I'll let you know once I've lived that part as well :)

D'aww! Sweet start, though lowkey troubled and tense.

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