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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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I sense a lot of infidelity incoming.

There has to be a point where Cadence and Silver Soldier get caught by Shining--I get that this is assuming that Shining is not 'sizing up' to Cadence's expectations, but still I refuse to believe that Shining is that clueless and oblivoius that his wife is cheating on him with the guards when he is not home

I'm starting to think both are unfaithful though...if Cadence has guards on the side, I would not be surprised if Shining has some mare (or mares) in his corner as well.

Just my opinion.

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It seems to me that Shining's unfaithfulness is heavily implied.

ever since he returned from Canterlot with a stride in his step (as well as some freshly-pressed dress clothes courtesy of Luna), it seemed that the Prince had found a beneficial means to keep himself in check during his business trips

Fortunately, none of them seemed to catch the scent of perfume on his neck; or at least, they didn’t try to say anything about that small detail.

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You figure Shining's screwing aground with Princess Luna??

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Looks like that to me. But that's just theorizing. A clop theorizing.

This story seems to have a prequel that is missing sorry if I am thinking to much into this

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I do have something for shining in mind for this story...But maybe in a spin off this screwing with Luna is explained in more depth ;)

Source: I am the commissioner

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Depends if you want to do two or three stories I mean you could have it where him and Luna are together and then that the new guy steals Luna is well or even go as far as takes twilight in a fourth one you can do with a lot of the royals really just cuck him all over the world

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Or better yet if you have this story go on long enough you can have have how they find out he’s with Luna How New guard then steals Not only Cadence but Luna is well then have the next story he takes twilight and I guess you can throw chrysalis in the mix as well to add salt to his wound you can make it even at the end Celestia planned all of this

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Just tossing out ideas sorry if it’s a bit much

I have nothing to contribute on this matter. Here's a sabaton song about people to pissed to die

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na man, i am always happy for some inspiration

Damn, that was hot! I love it!

Not gonna lie this is so far my fave series from you, hopefully it doent end in just two chapters

So.... picture 2137688 from derpibooru uh? Nice. For those that wanted some illustration on what to think of this chapter. Artist name: mik3thestrange

They're both cheating and unaware of each other's infidelity.

I'm loving how this is going, but at the same time I do hope Shining finds out

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I did commission mik for that one. Gave me the idea to commission it in the story as well

Looks like we will get a femcolt later.

I’m gonna keep reading this, I’m curious what’s gonna happen. But I really hope it doesn’t go into too dark netorare cuckholding.

Well this is getting interesting, looking forward for more

If Cadance’s consultation with Zecora was worth the bribe she gave her, then she knew that with every bottle Shining Armor drank, that the length of his cock would deplete by a miniscule amount. It certainly wouldn’t be enough for him to notice immediately, but all those bottles from that fridge were going to add up to a big decrease over time. And with that extra box of Zap-Tastic now carrying the same effects downstairs, Cadance was certain that he would end up with something more akin to a clit by the time he learns of everything she did.

Based on previous pics, this is going to be permanent, isn't it? If so, I really hope Shining becomes a mind broken, subservient househusband by the end.

This is going somewhere I wasnt expecting, kinda dark

At first, I figured this story was going to be something about just a typical cheating Cadance plot. By the time I reached chapter 3, I thought to myself "Great, she's gonna make Shining worthless, have her stud to herself, and netorare her husband". But after reading chapter 4, my opinion has changed. I greatly enjoyed it, I'm happy that Shining is just as guilty at cheating as his wife, and with Luna of all mares. Though I am personally against this shrinking, I am still eagerly awaiting what happens next. All in all, good job, and good story so far. Cannot wait for what comes next.

When shining armor drinks enough of that Castor Kennedy place our main new guard need to do your Luna from him after cadenza finding out Then turn him into a femboy And fuck him to

Oh-ho-ho! This is deliciously wicked!!

Knock her up, have Cadance "confront" Luna and Shining about each-other, Secretly bring Luna over Silver Stud Club, then have Luna slowly make Shining more mentally feminine though his dreams, then change him Physically at his own request.

Nice one from Silver there:rainbowlaugh:

Also, I re-iterate my previous statement: This is deliciously wicked!!!

Personally, I don't like where this is going. But that doesn't mean that the story is badly written. I'd rather not have Shining lose his dick and just have Shining and Luna accidentally stumble on Cadance and Silver. But that's my opinion, I like the method and style of writing and will continue to eagerly read this.

I saw pic 2235292 (explicit) on Derpibooru, and was reminded of this fic. I hope something like that happens in the future.

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Yeah. I found some of mik3thestrange’s work on e621, as well. I particularly noted the one with Shining Armor and Luna in the closet... with Spike watching in secret. It’d be interesting if that is how Cadance found out about Shining’s love affair.

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well its all commissioned from me so it makes sense that i use the pics to show stuff that happens in the story ^^

Well, I'm a light sleeper and I would wake up even by the noise of a mosquito ... Shining reminds me of my grandfather, snored and nothing woke him up, I could have the television on in the room and he would be sleeping like a log XD

I wonder if Silver is going to end up marrying and impregnating Cadance in the future.

Great story! I absolutely loved the scene in the fifth chapter with Shining talking to Cadance while Silver fucked her. And also the descriptions of poor Shiny not getting any proper sexual attention from his wife while Silver gets to fuck her almost whenever he wants. The dynamic of Silver being Shining's subordinate and getting back at him by fucking his wife is delicious.

Really hope the story becomes even crueler to Shining while Silver gets to enjoy all that he had lost, possibly even rubbing it in Shining's face eventually.

They're both kind of bad people because I don't know who cheated first what's a shiny or Cadence

I want to see this happen...or at least, that Luna might find a way to make it up to Cadence for sleeping with Shining, who according to her, has been a little too eager to get away from her for a while yet...naughty boy Shiny~no more big cock or normal husband activity for you mister~!:raritywink:

Cadence might've been sleeping around too, but it sounds like Shining has been really dropping the ball the most...hopefully he can be put in a more fitting place then:ajsmug:

Ooooo, I just thought of something! What if Shining neglected Cadence on purpose, just so he could get cucked, because maybe sleeping with Luna and cuckqueaning (could not find anything on whether that is the right term or not) Cadence wasn't enough?:rainbowkiss:

That was the hottest chapter so far. Given the dialogue from Cadance is different from last chapter, I assume this is a different night, and she's been manipulating Shining in his sleep for a while now? I wonder would he started wearing frilly dresses (or something feminine like 1941584 on Derpi) under his daily armor/outfit/clothes after a while?

BBB

This definitely seems like it is running concurrent with the last chapter, with the differences in dialogue a result of interpretation or changes his mind makes. Adding extra things here, changes to small things he did not hear clearly there.

Though seems Luna might unknowingly end up helping cadance change shining into more of a sissified stallion. With cadance working the physical through the drinks and Luna working the mental through the dreams. Shining getting double teamed by the mares.

Lords above, I am so torn. Half of me expects a complete sissified Shining Armor, while my other half expects a complete gender bender and the birth of Gleaming Shield.

I'm not sure that's Cadence...though if it is, I'm still excited!:ajsmug:

I'm waiting for the moment, where Shining grows his cock to fuck Cadence

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Yeah but I feel a little bit different that's the both guilty things like Cadence last getting punished for it

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My worry is that Cadance will suffer no consequences for this. Cheating is one thing, Armor is guilty of that too. But purposely denying him affection, as well as chemically modifying him so he will feel worthless to her, and dealing borderline dream gaslighting to put thoughts in his head. That's a tad far. And given his emotional state now, he'll either give up and let Cadance be more open with her affair, or he'll be aggressive and be met with rejection or forced subservience.

That being said, I still applaud the talent the writer is showing with such a dark, emotional journey.

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