Welp. We got Joker now boys.

I would be on board for a sequel to this, especially with the other moms.
This great overall.

Gods dammit, they stuck him in Arkham, didn’t they?

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Not exactly. My overall goal is to make this a series and I plan to keep Solstice as an antagonist. I just can't say when I'll finally be able to get to work on the story.

So any chance of a sequel and why didn't they find out what really killed the Captain?

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I do intend to do a sequel at some point, it's on my laundry list of projects that I'm trying to keep up with. 👍 As far as that death in particular, it wasn't so much the how as it was obviously a murder; the drive was more focused on the fact that it occurred and the length of time he had been dead. I know I mentioned an autopsy, but that is a natural part of the investigative process and is mentioned mostly to keep the aftermath as realistic as possible.

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I see, well I wonder what Fluttershy and Rainbow do when they hear what happened on the cruise that their mothers were on, I bet they will be shocked and scared for them.

That was quite the adventure. Pretty good world building and characterization. Everyone felt real if not a little odd in the twins case. Don't get me wrong; I loved them. They added an interesting element and helped show that Windy wasn't a shallow mare that was just interested in "big jocks". You can probably tell from my comments on other stories that I'm a fan of polyamory and to a lesser extent swinging. What I'm not a fan of is deception & cheating. I get a sense that Windy & Bow have an understanding because Windy has hinted if not out right expressed her feelings for Evershy. I'm glad Evershy recognizes the need to come clean with her husband and I'd like to think Windy will do the same with hers. I imagine the sequel will show how things will go for them so that is next on my reading list. Good job evoking emotions and telling a riveting story Marezinger Z. Thanks for creating and sharing.

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Thank you. In spite of the mildly fantastic nature of the some events, I am looking to maintain a realistic feeling with the characters in this universe. Situations like this are complicated and things don't just fall into place neatly, which is what is the sequel goes into as Evershy and Windy head home. I'm taking some liberties to reorganize a few things in the character's lives as this universe continues to expand and I'm hoping it will catch on. I hope you find the sequel just as strong if not stronger.