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Zecora or Cheerilee for what?
Like the coverart.
Like the title.
Like the tags.
Like the plot.
Execution could have used some work.
6797339 just wanted to see who was more popular
The idea was good, but yeah, it could have been better. Getting a proofreader or just looking it over again after you're done would help a lot.
One thing you should watch out for is when you keep shifting between past- and present-tense.
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Thanks mate and if anyone does want to proofread just drop me a pm
uh......ending was kind of weak.
6815717
Who said it was the ending mate
6816086 why would you upload an unfinished story?
6817473
Cause I'm an idiot thinkin it was finished
6818748 Well how about you finish it instead of reply to comments?
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Cause one I use my phone to reply to comments and two ADHD is a bitch and no that's not something bullshit excuse I suffer real bad from it but I try to do wot I can mate
6820222 I have a case of mild PPD and every story I have worked on is fully complete.
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Exactly mild. We all got are problems and we deal with them differently mate
6822076 But I'm not fully normal and have a disability like you. Don't use them as an excuse to be bad.
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Mate I'm not using it as an excuse to be bad, it's ma first macro fiction just need practice. Wanna help. Give me some constructive criticism I can understand that. Also I don't like thinking I'm disabled just slow and u shouldn't either mate