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First option Meliodas fights a group dragons to protect Barb
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Second Beats a group of mares who try to rape him.
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I vote both up
An op main character in an rgre world? FUCK YEAH
Is it somehow possible that I can get the old version for reading; Please?
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What does that rgre mean?
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Reverse gender roles, basically mares are the dominant ones and stallions are the house wife's.
Also you send a regular dude with powers of Meliodas to a feminist Nazi Equestria, only one way this can end.vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/nanatsu-no-taizai/images/a/ad/Meliodas_destroying_Danafor.png/revision/latest?cb=20141130121902
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Yep
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"IT WASN'T ME THIS TIME I SWEAR!"
alright, a rewrite, the first iteration was good enough just kinda all over the place in a few chapters, hope this will be better
Will nightmare moon be are daughter
I have a strange feeling I've read this before.
These story is already being writen.
aww but I liked the first one can we keep the first one or no? I dont mind getting a new one but I would prefer to have something to read while this is being written.
story I'm talking about is Seven Deadly Sins Demon King
Meliodas leaves the town with his new slave.
Thumbs up for yes, down for no
The main six confront Meliodas about not freeing the dragon from the slave marking right away.
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More Is needed.
Barb is my life now i will to protect her with any means necessary
Cliff hanger but i see it was as entertaining as ever moonking
make more chapters please
Hey moonking, are you rewriting this story, because I could've sworn that I've read this before and it was 5+ chapters along
only one thing bugs me, the high demons like Melodas have SEVEN Hearts while normal demons have Five, so you should change that in the first chapter. I also wonder how you will factor in his immortality curse in this, seems pretty good so far
Sorry for the long comment
First, off I like how (almost put who) you are rewriting the story, it has a much better hook to it and is more engaging, with you asking for some feedback on what should happen in the next chapter, there are a few spelling errors that I spotted and have put them below, I highly dought I spotted all of them and only saw the obvious ones.
This is in no way me pissing on the story or downgrading it in any way I remember these same errors from the previous story and while you got other ones that I saw in that story some were missed and easy to overlook when combing through an entire chapter.
I like the differences you made to the chapter over the other stories
might want to retype the words, that are above in bold in the quote boxes; splashed.
add keep after "can" and add better after "feel".
Just need to add a , to break the sentence after her is had me a little confused when reading it as one sentence.
I like the square bracket is meant to be an F so the sentence goes " as the others filed on behind her" I also think the "E" on "one" is not meant to be there.
Going to start my day with this awesome fanfic!!!
Celestia attacks Meliodas for accidentally enslaving four of the main six. Thumbs up for yes down for no
Celestia and Luna fight Meliodas over the enslavement of four of the main six only to be enslaved themselves. Thumbs up for yes down for no
The current POV is Luna, I assuming this is a typo, but if not then why are Rainbow and Applejack enslaved by Meliodas when it was Luna who knocked them out?
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"Oh, errors have been made." Cell, dbz abridged
Oooh you messed up now
I'm honestly liking this rewrite, though I also didn't mind how it was before. My suggestion is that if you can find the time, to try and remake the old version into a completely different story, I'm sure many people would like that.
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I’ll see your idea and raze it a scene where Meliodas gives them all the freedom potion except Celestia because she made the slave laws and he thinks she deserves a taste of her own medicine.
This looks to be getting interesting and after finding out the celly made the laws and now she is seeing her student get put under the slave thing she really has no grounds to be mad cause it was her that did it in the first place yet I can see her trying to in due it just cause she didn't think it through enough and if she did attack him she can't complain on the results of she wares a collar yet you can spin it to be her kink in the whole S&M fetish or her being pissy really your choice yet look at both options then decide
cant wait for the next chapter
I like it
Love this story plz keep up the great work!!!
“I don’t know if he does or doesn’t but something about him screams that he won’t hurt you unleash you start it.
Edit: should be unless you start it
Savior
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Enslaver
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I thumbs up enslaver because he enslaved Celestia and it's what she deserves after what she did to the stallions of equestria but the Luna enslavement I kinda don't like she was nice to him so I hope she get's freed soon
But Celestia can go fuck herself with that attitude she has but other Celestia in other fanfic's I like it's just this Celestia I don't like because she is kinda a bitch
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I get what you saying
hope the next chapter comes out soon.
SO is this going to become nation building now as he reforms all of Equestria's culture.
Personally I think the slave thing should be kept as a form of punishment for the worst of the worst, Celestia being one of them, granted not my story so you do what you think is right
I have to give the story to thumbs up I hope the next chapter comes out soon
Can't wait for the next one finally something different
Government type
democracy
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Government type
monarchy
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