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Moonking


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All New I see.

So he's going to have to devil fruit abilities, fire and lightning, because if not I will be disappointed.

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sorry, but only flames but he can use all of Zoro's attacks if that helps.

DNC

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You said he would be a thunder swordsmen in the discretion.:ajbemused:

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Sorry about that I forgot to change that. Thank you for telling me.

Grand line = ??????
Goal = ???????

Hope the next chapter comes out really soon

im liking this modified version of "one piece" :eeyup::yay::rainbowdetermined2:

I like this story, but I find a plot error, keep in mind that the fox sword Wado Ichimonji is a sword with the curse that it will kill its bearer unless it is able to resist the curse, so the protagonist I should be careful who takes his sword unless it does not have the curse or it takes time to activate

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wrong sword, the sword you're talking about is the one Zoro got from his friend and training rival as a kid, the sword with the curse is the sandai kitetsu

9795119
sorry, it was my mistake, but that does not answer me if you used a different sword or the curse does not affect in the short term, unless you think that the curse affects only those who use it

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I'm not to sure but i think it only kills you if you try to use the sword

liking it so far, could use work here and there, but liking it.

I know that the royal guard is generally as competent as storm troopers are accurate but this seems pretty stupid even for them.

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Same as one piece marines attack first ask questions later.

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So are you saying the Royal Marines are one piece marine stupid or is it the compounded stupidity of both organizations?

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no, I'm saying in the anime one piece the marines are like the guards from mlp. Real marines are badasses who go through some hardcore stuff.

Ehh f** em. IF this is their respons to him healping them, then good ridens.

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All that aside; it is a special kind of suicidal that hears ‘this really strong guy saved us but we’re scared of what will happen if we piss him off’ and decides ‘we should arrest or kill this guy who has not committed a single crime after performing a major public service we wouldn’t have been able to do and arrest his only know associate, who also hasn’t broken the law and was given a boat for everything she did for the people we’re trying to protect, because he is really REALLY strong’. Are tone piece marines actually dumb enough to try to ‘protect the citizens’ by committing what they should definitely know are blatant violations of the law there supposed to enforce? I ask purely as someone who has only ever seen a single random episode of one piece.

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Well let me break it down for you, the navy marines in one piece are if your strong your with them your ok or if not. if you refuse to do as we say you die as seen with ax-hand morgan.

"!08 caliber pound phoenix!" .

did you mean 108?

Comment posted by Moonking deleted Sep 2nd, 2019

It's funny when the ponies start their own problems.

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The One Piece Marines are the same people who destroyed several ships full of civilians and refugees just on the off chance a criminal was onboard one of the boats.

They believe in Absolute Justice, where any crime is a sin against the divinity if the World Nobles and must be severely punished.

Hell, their current leader in the series timeline ordered his own men to be killed at one point because they were understandably reluctant to run into battle against the strongest man in the world who can create tsunamis and potentially destroy the world around full power.

There are good and reasonable people among them, like Coby and Smoker, but the rules they are placed under encourage disproportionate action against anybody seen as dangerous to the order of the world and the government.

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If it weren’t for the fact that their members are apparently exempt from the law I would ask how have the marines not thrown the countries they protect into anarchy already.

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I would classify them as Lawful Evil.

They are generally awful people with some exceptions, but they also must obey their superiors' every commands and those superiors are beholden to the rulers of the World Government and often act as the World Nobles' glorified attack dogs.

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Aren’t world nobles those guys who are above the law, can get away with killing someone in the middle of a public space, and the navy will hunt you across the world if you try to hurt one?

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Yep.

They are above the law because they genuinely believe themselves to be different from the rest of humanity and inherently superior.

On the bright side, there have been a couple who managed to break free of the mentality taught by the toxic environment their people set up for themselves.

Also, even then it is less the Marines breaking the law and more the law being rigged in the favor of the nobles and said nobles being the ones the Marines' commanding officers answer directly to.

What does ooc mean ai know what oc means but what is the extra o for

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Out of character

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Oh ok i have just never seen it before so i had to ask

Comment posted by NmB deleted Oct 8th, 2019
NmB

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If he doesn’t get all the abilities I’m assuming he doesn’t get any of the weakness, like water or the rare metal right? Or maybe he get weaker but doesn’t faint or becomes useless?
PD: your fics is ok BUT you are going to fast. And sometimes of the conversations and interaction seem either force or non sensical. Why didn’t we get any reaction from him when he was teleported to this new world, how did he knew all of the attacks, why did zecora didn’t want him to kill the manticores, if he knew what the devil fruit did, then why was he surprise by it’s effects? Why is he telling everyone about his powers? Why is he so trusting? What’s his back story? Most if not all of this question should be addressed in the first’s chapters of a story.

How are Zoro and Ace "kings" of the sea?

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

Always a pity when a story with such potential is left to languish. *Sips tea* I still hope this continues though.

Comment posted by Darth_krayt deleted Jun 25th, 2020

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The sword is sandai kitetsu one of the three kitetsu swords each supposedly cursed. Zoro found it in a barrel of old worn swords at a weapon shop and when finding out the sword was cursed threw it into that air while holding his arm out testing his luck against the curse. His luck ended up winning with the sword simply circling around his arm instead of slicing it off.

Hope this comes back.:fluttercry:

Updates ?????

I laughed the took out my wallet then pulled out my bank card. He smiled then took my card then pushed the swords and a strange-looking fruit. My way, the fruit had a tag on the side. The one I was looking at looked like flames. I looked at the tag and read it. “Flame-flame fruit type logia.

I laughed the took out my wallet then pulled out my bank card. He smiled then took my card then pushed the swords and a strange-looking fruit. no way, the fruit had a tag on the side. The one I was looking at looked like flames. I looked at the tag and read it. “Flame-flame fruit type logia.

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