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good start, but there's a lot of grammatical errors, but still a good start.
7457763 yeah i know
I SHIP IT!!!
Is Rainbow Dash not going to punished for attempted murder of a minor? Especially since it's the son of death I would imagine Luna at least make sure she never tries it again since Celestia can be a little soft sometimes. Even then I think Celestia would punish her for that.
RAINBOW MUST PAY!!!!!
7462662 dont worry she will get whats coming to her AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH!
Sorry
7462725 and she will!
7462755 that's good
oh my god rainbow wtf just out right tried to kill a child and over a bite mark that doesn't mean the same thing as a normal hickey the shame the shame.
7463042 i mean he is the son of death but yeah i have one twisted mind i feel ashamed...and its gone
7463059 i'm kinda hopeing shell go through a mental breakdown once she finally realizes that she tried to kill a child even if he was deaths son
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Im liking it, but what mecha said.
7463076 dont worry i got it covered you just got to wait
Servers you right rainbow dash
7463994 If you need someone to edit for you I can.
7467652 have you pressed Q lately
This story is is just... just awful. I mean, I couldn't even get pasted the scene where the (100% Gary Stu) main character ran from his school. Not only is this bad in both the sense of the story and the grammar, but this has descended to the level of the worst fic in existence, "My Immortal." The character is awfully angsty and his situation is way too predictable. My friend and I even made a small game of guessing what ridiculous thing would happen next to the character. We didn't get very far, considering we had to stop reading this piece of illiterate trash. What's sad though, was that every time we guessed, we were right.
All in all, this is one of the most cringey and illiterate pieces of "literature', and it would need something not short of divine intervention to bring this story out of the dregs of this website.
7467993 eh
7467856 ooo yea i have hehe death bloosom is ready
7468647 aye~
Well besides the grammar I like this story very denomicy and HAHA to rainbow crash
death is not good or evil death is needed to keep balance
7471056 well said my friend
7471151 2 things i want to get off my chest
1. You need an editor to fix your grammar problem
2. When will the next chapter be out?
7478560 um to ansewr your first question i i dont have one and is looking for one and for your second question um maybe later today
Is it just me that likes Blue Blood? Every fic I read with Blue Blood in it he gets treated with nothing but disrespect, and it's starting to make me wonder if I'm the only person who likes him.
hes not dead almost dead maybe
Sheer WHY
For some reason I would want Sheer and Donovan back together.
But thats my opinion.
Me venting my frustration of Sheer down below.
Pay no mind.
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Sheer f%$# you for what you have done to Donovan. You gave up to fast, you should of always had hope of him returning.
7485719 yeah sorry dude but i have another in mind but it will not happen right away or will it hehehe
I seem to like this story more than my other ones
7487670 when is the next chapter?
7490057 um either in a few minutes or tomorrow
7490114 hope in a few minutes but i would not mind reading this tomorrow, it gives me something to do
Great story just needs a editor for the grammer
So why had you let Sheer Wind give up on him so easily?
7491071 thought it make it intresting
7492318 i understand but still i can't help but feel like it was just for the sake of the plot trust dude half the times i don't like that i get enough of that from the show
dawwwww lovely
what do you mean by that? Isn't the princesses already his friends? I do not see the point in that
7507828 yeah your right im gonna change that
7507828 fixed
I'm liking it but the grammar, punctuation, and capitalization.
I'm vary happy with this chapter is very interesting to read keep up a good work update more soon
7511492 glade you thinkits intresting and there will be an update very soon
GRAMMAR BOI!
7525742 i know its bad
Oh my god *shakes head* are you serious now? Your going that route? Really? Your having him be the biological son of both Link and Princess Zelda from the "Legend Of Zelda: Ocarina Of Time"? I do not know what to think of that
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7531803 yes, yes i am
7531803 also its my favorite game