The Mane Six meet a Tsundere

After being called by the Cutie Map to stop an incident in Ponyville, the girls discover a stallion being pursued by the worst kind of girl imaginable: a tsundere. How can this possibly work out well? It probably might not.

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Linkonpark100

Linkonpark100 #1 · Apr 30th, 2019 · 3 · ·

Uh.

Tsun-day-rays are crazy.

Obsidian Shard

Obsidian Shard #2 · Apr 30th, 2019 · 3 · ·

The simple fact that this is painfully accurate to the genre is worth the like and fav. Good job. Lol.

The Force

The Force #3 · Apr 30th, 2019 · · ·

I hate liar's

Jade Dawn

Jade Dawn #4 · Apr 30th, 2019 · 3 · ·

Y'know, I'm not really well-versed in anime terminology, so the point of this story is kind of getting lost on–

Suddenly Frazzle Dazzle was lifted into the air in a column of divine white light. Her hair was flying all around her, and her body was spread-eagle.
"Convenient plot deviiiiice," sang an angelic messenger. "Convenient plot deviiiiice! Deeeeuuuuus ex maaaaachinaaaaa!"
"Deeeeuuuus ex maaaaachinaaaaa!" repeated a choir of equally divine messengers. "Hosanna to the holy script! Hosanna to the hooooolyyyyy scriiiiiiipt!"
The divine light evaporated and Frazzle Dazzle swirled in the air before landing on all four hooves. Her opening eyes were all white at first, but after a blink or two, they returned to their sparkly green self.
"I think I just had a premonition!" Frazzle exclaimed. "My dead mother contacted me in a dream and told me that the alien warlord she was protecting me from was actually...my father!"
The girls just looked on with absolute confusion.
"Come on! I'm the chosen one sent to avenge my race! Let's go get that annoying guy that I like a lot and confess my feelings for him, and we'll go to space and fight off aliens and have the best experience ever!"

...

OK, that was hilarious. Have a like.

On a side note, it would have been nice for the Six to reference their run in with that Alicorn OC.

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BradyBunch

BradyBunch #6 · May 5th, 2019 · 4 · ·

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Now, even though we all hate tsunderes, we all want one for our waifu. Firestorm got a pseudo-tsundere in the form of Rainbow Dash, you know. But at least she isn't, well...insane. Rainbow Dash can kick butt.

Now, repeat after me: Tsunderes are not misunderstood; they are bimbos.

Wait, no-!

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quakeSanchez

quakeSanchez #8 · Aug 19th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Somewhat rough aroundthe edges, but hilarious none the less.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #9 · Dec 11th, 2019 · 2 · ·

This tree differed from normal trees in that it was hollow, made out of crystal, and was a lavish home to a princess of Equestria.

Normal trees were at most one of those things. Usually hollow, but not always.

“Unless they're Queen Chrysalis, of course, Rainbow. But, um, have you ever thrown a chair at her?”

"I was gonna at the wedding, but you stopped me!"
"You saw what she did to my dress. If anypony was going to hurl furniture at her, it was going to be me."

Fun stuff overall, though you do drift into talking heads after Frazzle races off post-epiphany. Which you really don't want to do with six characters in the room. Take this exchange as an example:

"Why, Pinkie Pie, darling, what makes you say that?"
"Is it because she's confused, inconsiderate, and focused only on a stallion?"
"No! Because she didn't invite me into space as well! Hmph!"

I have no idea who said that middle line. Attributin helps.

Still, a hilarious read. Thank you for it.

Scoutboy25