The Vision of Equestria

Late one night, Sunburst receives a visitor with astounding news.

There is another world out there.

How will Sunburst respond to such news? Not the way you'd think.

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ScribbleSnow

ScribbleSnow #1 · Aug 18th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Holyy buuuuck

BradyBunch

BradyBunch #2 · Aug 18th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Yeah, that's what I hoped people would say when they read this.

Xanderfox

Xanderfox #3 · Aug 18th, 2019 · · ·

Why is it now I want to see Starlight Glimmer arrive as Crystal is attacking Sunburst along with... Starlight Glimmer because they wanted to tell him about Equestria? How would Crystal react if his unwarranted attack was stopped by a pony, who likely would tell "Equestia doesn't want a violent sociopath like you in it!" I could easily see Glimmy making it clear Crystal Hue isn't welcome in Equestria and she'd make sure he never saw it again.

ScribbleSnow

ScribbleSnow #4 · Aug 18th, 2019 · · ·

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Uh will there be a chapter 2??

BradyBunch

BradyBunch #5 · Aug 18th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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...No.

ScribbleSnow

ScribbleSnow #6 · Aug 19th, 2019 · · ·

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; - ;

NaiadSagaIotaOar

NaiadSagaIotaOar #7 · Sep 11th, 2019 · · ·

More stories should end with bad things happening to Sunburst

Well, first off, the look. I just think it's terribly comfortable. I think everyone will be wearing them in the future.

… Have to say I'm not quite sure about the phrasing there, though? I'm not sure I'd say people would wear a look, so I'd probably have made the comment be about the cloak or coat or something.

leeroy_gIBZ

leeroy_gIBZ #8 · Sep 28th, 2019 · · ·

Reviewed.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #9 · Dec 11th, 2019 · 2 · ·

You obviously weren't listening earlier when I said I am the only person who doesn't have a pony counterpart in Equestria. It has to mean something.

"Okay, I'm going to ask one question and only one question abot your vision, okay?"
"... Okay. One."
"Now I know you didn't see the entire world, but did you get a sense for the population density in the areas you did see?"
"I told you. Towns and villages and cities as grand as ours, if not grander!"
So there are seven billionish ponies over there?"
"... I mean, I wasn't counting."
"Of course not. But ballpark it."
"... Maybe?"
"I'm just saying, it's entirely possible that there's a broad swath of the population who don't have equine analogues."
"No! I have to be special! Luna came to me!"
"Clearly. But she may not have done a complete census of both worlds. Maybe you're special for a different reason?"
"So you believe me? You'll help me?"
"Crystal, knowing calculus and building an interdimensional portal are two very different things. Unless you can tear open reality yourself, I wouldn't even know where to begin."
"... Let me get back to you on that."
"Crystal? Crystal, that wasn't a suggestion. Where are you going? Crystal!"