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I shall be tracking this, for I am interested in seeing where it shall lead.
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Thanks
Is this a Displaced, or just some guy getting sent there?
Ooooohhh!
You have peaked my interest indeed.
Judgment set is best pally transmog. Best with skullflame shield and [thunderfury blessed blade of the windseeker]
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imma say just some guy
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Cool beans.
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Did someone say [Thunderfury, Blessed Blade of the Windseeker]?
I am incredibly intrigued and I cant wait for more and how this will turn out.
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Thanks, I hope I don't disappoint!
Tracking hope you find the time to post often
Ahhhhh, so it be this way huh?
They grow up so fast. Lol
I don't know. 5E isn't quite as fun as 3.5 or the 1st and 2nd. They took a LOT of stuff out to make the game easier and simpler so younger, and dumber, people can play it. I mean hell, used to be you needed to essentially be a professional mathematician to play the game with equations determining everything. Then there was the dozens if not hundreds of playable races, and spellcrafting. That and in 5 you have a hard cap for your stats that can rarely be pushed tiny amounts whereas in 3.5 you could make an entire team of godslayers. Which admittedly is a huge part of why they took so much out. Dungeon Masters got tired of having to throw entire pantheons of gods at one Barbarian for a fair fight. Fun times, even funner stories to tell and be heard... I feel I have to note I'm just complaining about the edition, not the story. Good premise and start. I just dislike how much they've removed from it. At the least I would've liked for them to keep the races. They really did remove races to basically nothing.
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I have to agree with you but in all honesty I'm not that familiar with the other editions, I have all the books for 5e, and being a dm I know most of the rules for it. The story isn't really going to be restricted to the rules from the book, I'm most likely just going to be using it to refer to spell and the like.
No worries mate, this was a damn good chapter.
I like that you didn't take the "one year later" route with a brief explanation to get the story rolling like others do.
Don't run yourself ragged, dudder.
You spelled Dissuade wrong but otherwise good chapter!
*slams fist on a table* Another one!!! Submit to us the collective!!! LOL but seriously though you gotta pump out more chapters, please
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really glad you're enjoying the story, I do try to pump them out as fast as time permits.
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So ehh... will the MC gonna have a love interest? I bet its Cinnamon Twist and once they are teens they go gaga for each other which then evolved to consummate love at an early stage, sorry for the rant, Maybe a harem and correct me if I'm wrong, this story is set in an anthro mlp verse right or is it mlp characters as humans not equestria girls colour palette but humans with real world skin colours (tan,pale,ebony) and strange naming, ooh could you please add my pyromancer OC in your story. 🤣🤓😆
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Lots of questions, some I can't answer some I can.
So first off, the MC and all the people he's met so far have been Humans with real-life skin colors, and different color hair. And tbh all the other questions regarding the story would lead to spoilers, so sorry can't answer those, and adding OCs to the story atm I think wouldn't work, its too early to really think about stuff like that. Maybe later on when the lore of the world has been established more.
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Hey😁 I'll just hold you onto that, inserting my pyromancer oc to your story, damn I am so hype with this story that It finally made me published my draconequues sci-fi story, that one I know it's a rush job been working on it like 2 years give or take and just on the chapter 1 alone too sheesh, and I'll get comments about it, but between you and me and other writers, I believe comments are what really fuels us to write heh heh heh. Sorry for ranting, I am just that hyped with your story *insert crazy happy pinkie here*
being cradled in their arms feeling the warmth from their body
You said there, like "He went over there!", instead of their, like "This land is theirs."
That was not a dream
That was all real.
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I started back in 3.5. DnD was more story than combat back then. You roll, dm says some stuff, and you continue on. Now though? "I kick down the door and plant my axe in the nearest bandit!"
Composure. A composer is a musician.
You can drop part of this sentence.
I settled in and made myself a sandwich.
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Thanks for all that, I went back and did some editing. I don't have anyone that prereads these before I release them so there's bound to be mistakes.
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I'll do that if you'd like.
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sure if you'd like
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If you'd like for a harsh proofreader, yeah... I was raised by grammar nazi...
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Hell yeah brother, I try to do my best but sometimes it's just not good enough.
Also, side note, how are you liking the story?
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Tis a good start! I should know, I start and stop several fanfics.
I love this story but that! That's just a bag of bull
I love this story. Hope the new chapter comes soon
way to bring the being that got you into this with you for the ride. this already has me hooked.
looks like this equestria is in hard mode, reminds me of 'the hero is too cautious'
this badlands trip wrecks trap all over it.
3 year's old an he can form full coherent sentences?
If this is your first attempt let me be the first one to say, you are talented my friend. The firsts chapter alone is 9/10. Honestly It’s amazing that you manage to pull this at your first attempt.
This keeps getting better and better.
I don’t understand his thought process behind doing everything possible to cover for Dessert and his bitch of a mother. I understand that he couldn’t do anything by fighting with her as a child, but why would he not tell his parents?
I don’t understand, did you not write in the previous chapter that they where going to explore the mine and expose the mayor? What happen to that?
PD: for being a old man in a little kid’s body he’s pretty dumb, talking kids to a dangerous place in a zone known for killing explorers ?
I don’t understand him, did his father gave up on the kids ? Really ? For being so noble and shit he didn’t even try to save the orphans.
You really need to explained this things because they are gigantic plot holes.
All this aside your fic is really interesting, I love how your protagonist start as a child and slowly adquieres experience and skills, can’t wait for the next chapter.
and second the ability to negate the negative effects of both Fire & Ice, don't want you dying of heat, or freezing to death. " I joked.
Did you mean he joked?
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I haven't read the story yet but for some reason the knight makes me think of Deadpool as a templar which makes me really interested into reading this
Hahaha! A story about a Paladin, mind you a Paladin story I actually like. You sir/ma'am are quite good at writing, I cannot wait for the next chapter. May Fortune Guide Your Path, Friend.
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I feel that it swapped perspectives. Plus other clues later down the chapter makes this true.
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Blackmail. Sweet sweet blackmail.
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He does have his old memories.
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Good show.