I don’t understand, did you not write in the previous chapter that they where going to explore the mine and expose the mayor? What happen to that? PD: for being a old man in a little kid’s body he’s pretty dumb, talking kids to a dangerous place in a zone known for killing explorers ? I don’t understand him, did his father gave up on the kids ? Really ? For being so noble and shit he didn’t even try to save the orphans. You really need to explained this things because they are gigantic plot holes. All this aside your fic is really interesting, I love how your protagonist start as a child and slowly adquieres experience and skills, can’t wait for the next chapter.
Hahaha! A story about a Paladin, mind you a Paladin story I actually like. You sir/ma'am are quite good at writing, I cannot wait for the next chapter. May Fortune Guide Your Path, Friend.
He knocked someone out using blunt force trauma to the head? Yay, brain damage!
The protagonist is kind of an asshole, and an idiot, huh? Lived an entire life before this one and still didn't learn common sense. That's honestly damn impressive.
this badlands trip wrecks trap all over it.
I don’t understand, did you not write in the previous chapter that they where going to explore the mine and expose the mayor? What happen to that?
PD: for being a old man in a little kid’s body he’s pretty dumb, talking kids to a dangerous place in a zone known for killing explorers ?
I don’t understand him, did his father gave up on the kids ? Really ? For being so noble and shit he didn’t even try to save the orphans.
You really need to explained this things because they are gigantic plot holes.
All this aside your fic is really interesting, I love how your protagonist start as a child and slowly adquieres experience and skills, can’t wait for the next chapter.
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I haven't read the story yet but for some reason the knight makes me think of Deadpool as a templar which makes me really interested into reading this
Hahaha! A story about a Paladin, mind you a Paladin story I actually like. You sir/ma'am are quite good at writing, I cannot wait for the next chapter. May Fortune Guide Your Path, Friend.
Updated the chapter and made it completely different, tell me if its any good!
He knocked someone out using blunt force trauma to the head? Yay, brain damage!
The protagonist is kind of an asshole, and an idiot, huh? Lived an entire life before this one and still didn't learn common sense. That's honestly damn impressive.