Sisterly Love

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Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #1 · Apr 30th, 2019 · · ·

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Yeah, makes it a little easier for readers to find the kinks they like

Shakespearicles

Shakespearicles #2 · May 4th, 2019 · 4 · ·

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I've said it before, Fimfiction needs a more advanced tagging system.

xRei

xRei #3 · May 7th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Contest judge leaving my thoughts.

I have little say. I think I can sum it up this way:

Well written and surprisingly hot. Great use of dialogue. Devoid of story or context and uses the incest theme minimally. It was nice. With a larger word count/more chapters and something of a larger narrative attached, could have been fantastic.

Either way I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #4 · May 8th, 2019 · · ·

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Hey thanks, I really appreciate you saying that
I definitely sacrificed a little context to catch that deadline, though I always wanted it to just be a slice of life
I wanted to kind of drop you in the middle of their weird home life, like it's just a typical day for them, but I could've done a better job explaining things as the story went
I mainly wanted to capture their particular dynamic as well as I could, so I'm glad you really enjoyed the dialogue
But
There are planned sequels and I think this will work much better once their dynamic is more established.

Koshka5