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Silviana


I always think I have many similar qualities with Twilight Sparkle, but everyone else said I act like Pinkie Pie. Then again, I realized I am just a newbie writer with a weird imagination.

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In the winter when everything is supposed to be colder than usual, that’s for you to be reminded of the warm things you have lost and abandoned long ago. The thing you wish you hold just a little bit much longer, the thing you can’t even regret leaving.

But when some accident’s trick resurfaces what she had lost, could Sunset moved on from the past?


My entry for Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest: Changing Seasons.

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Comments ( 15 )

i have know idea why this fic made me think of Alex louis armstrong just being there

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Hm... Interesting! but how... and in which part?

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idk and the part where sunset threatens to call the cops in the crowd just bam hes there watching it all happen

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You know what? Now I can also see it.

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and now you cant un see it

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We should talk more sometime later!

I like the idea of Sunset x Trixie, but the grammar in just the beginning is atrocious. I cannot read this.

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I am glad you like the idea! It’s quite rare, so I am afraid that people won’t warm up to the idea.
And I am sorry for the atrocious grammar. I still have a lot to learn and English isn’t my first language.

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That explains a lot. I was thinking the way it was written was like it had been literally translated from another language to English and i see I'm not too far off. Won't make me read it, cause it'd be entirely too distracting, but it makes sense. Good luck.

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