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MysteriousStranger


TwiShy, AppleDash and Rarixie lover and writer. Also a gamer. Something else you need to know is that I'm strongly against Alicorn Twilight.

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This story is a sequel to Prideful Confession


Confessing was the hardest part. Now the rest should be piece of cake. Or at least that's what Trixie thought.
With no experience in dating, will Trixie's first date succeed or will she make her a fool of herself in front of her crush?

This story was written with the help of my brother in arms, Windsor. Thanks, buddy! :twilightsmile:

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Comments ( 13 )

Well, first and foremost, you're welcome buddy! It was a delight to help with this story :twilightsmile:
Reading the finished product was an amazing experience since I forgot how funny Trixie's interactions with Sunset turned out! :rainbowlaugh:

I also hope that Zalla likes this story :scootangel:

9175503 You were of great help! :pinkiehappy:

I'm sure he will :raritywink:

9175503
I very much did. You two did great on this. Trixie hiding her insecurities behind her massive ego, just as she should be.


9175532
I'm glad with how this turned out. Trixie's character was right on the money. A bit strong on the tsundere, but otherwise very much enjoyable. Sunset being the tease she was was amusing. I liked the shopping part the best of all. That jealous moment Sunset got was cute. I love it when stuff like that happens. It makes the characters seem more real than just simply always being okay with everything that happens. Then there's the ending. I loved it.

Sunset really had to spell it out for Trixie and the way Trixie got the final word in was nice. She really left Sunnybunny dumbstruck with amazement.

9175946 I'm glad you liked your gift. You do much for me, and I'm happy to be able to repay you somehow. I had fun writting it, and it was all worth it to see your approval. You're awesome, 11 :rainbowdetermined2:

9175946
Welp, I am glad that you enjoyed it then! :pinkiehappy:

Heh, I'm SO so glad I came back to you and your stories on a whim cause I wouldn't have found this hella adorable story to enjoy and fav~ :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

10780846 Thank you! I'm very happy to hear it :rainbowkiss:
If you're interested in how SunTrix works out, check out the fic I'm currently working on, My Chemical Reaction. The SunTrix from this one-shot and its prequel are canon there, but as a side ship :twilightsmile:

10781119
Heh, np. Ur welcome and I actually have that story already in my "Read Later" list but, it may take a while since I got other stories to try out first :twilightsheepish:

10781855 No worries. Have fun reading everything you have due! :pinkiehappy:

10781860
Ok, thank you. Same to you as well~ :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

“Excuse me, ladies…” the shop attendant approached to us. We both turned our heads to look at him. “Other customers wish to use the changing room you’re blocking. Would you please…?”

Wow... *throws fireball at clerk*

I Was Eagerly Looking For Article Like This, Right To The Point, And Detailed As Well Accordingly Depending Upon The Matter of Topic. You Have Managed This Greatly For Sure.

11128404 Thank you, although this story is a sequel where the asking out actually happens :twilightsmile:

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