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RarityEQM
Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem
RarityEQM
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No wiser words were ever spoken.
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Assuredly, this is one of the finest ways to go, if you have a choice!
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I'm sure Spike would agree!
You've hit on-hundred?
I-is this your last story? Are you going to leave us? I hope not.
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I've entirely too many stories to write to stop now, regardless of what I may have said years prior!
Just as our hero thought of a way to escape the spell wore off and he resumed his normal size and volume solidly wedging his head and snout into those wonderfully plush cheeks Fluttershy gasped at the sudden drako wedgie
Spikey how could you and with my best friend too!
As the front door to her cottage burst open
lol This kept playing in my head while i read this
It just ends like that?
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Tis written based on the style that B_25 uses, which often abruptly ends, but this opens the way for a sequel, should he take a liking to it. :)
If not, well, It was a nice gesture I suppose
Maaaaaaaan, where do I even being with this?
You and I don't really know each other, that is, besides our short exchanges of comments—and then you go and do a beautiful thing like this for mesa. I even made a joke a while back to my close friends, all of whom I spend most of my days with, that if someone had written a micro fic during my dark days as a surprise—that proably would have been enough lift me and show me that I was cared for.
But none of them thought to do so, and none of them had to, but even still, it would have been a lovely gesture.
But then, despite our lack of words to each other, you have shown through your actions that someone is willing to write something as wonderful as this, and for a person like me, all as a surprise gift. Even if the contents of this tale were bad—which was not the case—the act alone touched me greatly.
But really. There are no fancy words for me to offer. Not higher meaning I can pluck out of my ass. Only that seeing something like this made my day better, and placed upon me a smiled that I still wear as I type out these words. Thank you for doing this, Rarity, and I intend to get you back for it.
It makes me both happy, and sad, that despite this being your first micro fic... that you've already done far better of a job than I ever could.
You fuckin' nail it with not only the voice and prose, but how you describe the world to evoke its scope in the reader:
All of these are really good.
But this?
A fucking masterpiece of a paragraph.
You use scent in a way I've been struggling to do for a while now. Your prose and writing are concise evocative. What takes you a paragraph to create, I spend paragraphs telling the reader how the scale of everything made the character feel. Where I rely heavily on logic and feelings, you bound the two in imagination to paint the scenario, thus evoking in the reader what I spend rambling and telling that happened inside the character.
The only downside to this writing is that some words were spent stating how he got this way, and though it was a comcial and revealed character, didn't do much for the plot. I would still keep this in, however, because I enjoy it anyways. It also kind of felt like it was meant to be longer, but cut away quick. This works for chapter based stories, but not quite as well for one-shots. There should be some completion of an arc or point, you know?
That aside, you wrote in under 2K that which would take me 8K, and you've shown that I proably won't be able to beat you in quality.
Not that I won't try.
~ Yr. Pal. B
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Well, darling, if that's the way you feel about it, then it takes no more than a quick press of a button to fix this problem.
There. See that?
I've changed it from complete to incomplete.
It cuts away so abruptly, so to leave me some room for future chapters. No point in writing an entire saga as a gift if you didn't like the first entry. But now that it seems you approve, let's see how far we can take this, shall we?
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You're the best thing that's ever happened in my life.
Buzz off, Intricate. I've found a new best friend!
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Oh, author drama! Lemme get my popcorn.
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lol.
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Hot dog, this was an amazing start, that's for sure!
media.tenor.com/images/145a13884625cbddd17e5c33a4ddb170/tenor.gif the real question is if Spike's body is ready 😏
...
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The real answer is: It is not.
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Sssshhh, spoilers!
Also, hello!
Swiggity swooty...I'm here for the booty
Prays for willpower upon RairtyEQM
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*Rarity hears your prayers and becomes empowered*
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Good. Very good.
If I might take a moment to be honest and a bit crass, I really wouldn't mind if a portion of this story had Spike finding himself in a more...intimate location, one very much near where he is now, and involves a variety of flower-centric metaphors.
Regardless of my particular wants, I do enjoy what I'm reading now quite a bit. Thanks for the chapter
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You would do well to keep reading
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You best believe I have no intention of doing otherwise!
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*raises arms to join this Spirit Bomb worthy empowerment prayer*
Gawd! How do you fit so much in so little?
(And that thought pertains to both inside and out of the story!)
Even though he has yet to speak, in under 3k words, you've been able to sell Spike as a relatable guy. He's in a situation many (or maybe just me) would love to be in, and yet, he's still paying respects; still having walls up for the sake of his friend. But seeing them being torn down is way better than having none, to begin with.
You get the impression he's just your average guy caught in a situation that's simply too much for him. He's put up a fight, but it's not one he could have held for long. By doing this, it makes his character more relatable, and everything that follows seen without scorn. You really are good at using the limited perspective to evoke the same wavelength Spike has in the reader.
And the details. The details! The way you described the panties was terrific, but the details about the springiness to them was ingenious. You tease what could come next while delivering on what's occurring now. Every chapter is sequenced perfectly and leaves the readers actually excited for what comes next.
You do good work.
~ Yr. Pal, B
BRUH
Wow, Rarity! That was amazing! Thank you.
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Wow! Um...You're welcome darling?
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Hey, thanks man!
*intrigue intensifies*
Perfection! Fluttershy feels so real, and the dynamic between the two is dynamite!
Though, if I'm being honest, I didn't realize this was anthro until hands were mention.
Lola!
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Well I can go through and replace hands with hooves, should you like.
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Nononono!
Keep it the way you envisioned it, sister!
Part of me wants to give thanks to your continued insomnia, considering it leads to gold like this. The other is hoping you can actually get a healthy amount of sleep so you don't burn out completely.
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I've been enjoying these chapters with slight guilt because of that.
What a tease
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I do so love to tease
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Can we expect a sequel?
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Well, before that happens this story needs a proper ending first, wouldn't you say?
Wherever will we find something like that?
Are you going to let him get back to full size and ravish Fluttershy? It would be cool
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It would be, wouldn't it?
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You got the positions backward. Fluttershy would be the one to do the ravishing.
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Yeah, you're right.
Oh the Equenity! I'm not sure my heart can bear the suspense!
You truly are Nightmarity! Back to wreak absolute fabulous havoc!
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Loving it so far
Reminds me of the story where Twilight accidentally is turned into a pair of panties that Rarity wears.
Oh, my! This is very interesting! And what a way to tease this out!