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underrated Drake


Just a regular guy who has very little knowledge on MLP but a lot of creativity.

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Not a bad story, also the artist name is ziemniax

He's gonna need to work on that snoring issue though.

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It's probably fine, but just in case someone decides that linking the source to this story's current cover image is a violation of the rule against linking NSFW images, the derp number is 1989376.

Very nice.

"You really are. I know that I had my eyes on Rarity for the longest time, but… I knew she was never going to like me… as a man… that she was way out of my league,”

Imagine being 95% of the way there and then telling the girl that you're with her because you couldn't be with a different, hotter girl.

:rainbowwild: :facehoof:

Upgrade your sexy talk, spike. :moustache:

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First person to notice that!

You say "All my life I've pinned for him."
Should be "pined".

The only thing that I still don't get is if this is anthro or EQG.
Like, if they are anthro and in a school/campus/university setting, just the alternate universe tag is enough :rainbowlaugh:

Sometimes I do read this kind of fics and it was an enjoyable read. Well done :twilightsmile:

It was quite good but got rather sloppy near the end. Positions the characters took and such were rather difficult to pin down and the dialogue was a bit too quickly turning from Spike being inexperienced and enjoying the new sensations, and suddenly becoming a well seasoned sex machine.

But still enjoyable.

What are the fetishes in this story?

Over those amazingly big and round F-Cup breasts. So big, so round and soft that they were the envy of all the girls on campus.

Gloria Pritchett (Modern Family) is a real life 32 F. Annette Funicello (original Mouseketeers & movie actress) was a 34D (basically the same size).

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“Because, ever since we’ve known each other, you’ve treated him like shit,” Rainbow Dash said

Sweet talked a ruby out of him in Secret Of My Excess by implied promise of a closer relationship & reneged.

:moustache:

“WHAT THE DEVIL IS GOING ON HER?!!!!” she asked enraged.

I would have thought that to be blindingly obvious, Miss Can't-Take-A-Hint

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Comment posted by SWEETOLEBOB18 deleted Dec 1st, 2022

“WHAT THE DEVIL IS GOING ON HER?!!!!” she asked enraged.

Well, darling, let me explain this in a way you can understand. You are so last season's model.

... or as Rainbow might say Spike has found someone 20% cooler and 100% less of a bitch.

Fluttershy was just sitting there, in a trance, her skin pail, her gaze staring into the nothingness, and her brain playing back Rarity’s comments over and over again.

Unless she has her head in a bucket (which I wouldn't put past some versions of Fluttershy I've read) that is the wrong "pail". It should be pale.

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