Huge anime fan... Who still likes equestria girls... Call a weeb or brony, I don't care. Peace ✌
Sunset was walking on the street, in a freezing blizzard. She was exhausted and was about to give up, until she noticed a small log cabin on the top of the hill, one never before seen by the girl.
Once she steps in, she encounters an unexpected trio, and a conversation that turns her life around.
Note: Rated this as teen due to mild swearing, use of alcohol alongside the presence of death.
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Of course it's an Anon-a-Miss story. Why would I expect anything else?
9491333
Well I tried to make it different and leave all the craziness of the usual Anon-A-Miss fic, but I can't blame if you don't like Anon-A-Miss since its overused.
Interesting idea. 7/10.
So taking the CMC confessed but was a bit too late or almost too late and Sunset had vanished at the time?
9492294
Yeah it was kinda the point
Its certainly different from the common Anon A Miss stories I usually see. Not bad
9492363
Thank you
9492357
Love to see more, how Sunset deals with reuniting with the others, and how they try to regain her trust.
I'm sure won't be easy for them.
i mean they all failed her, the Rainbooms, the teachers, the school and Twilight.
Not saying she should hate them, or want nothing to do with them.
But not saying she open her arms to them either, think it be a long road to healing, and even then some rifts will or may stay open.
9492391
I kinda left that out because I'm not good with that and its easy to overdo it.
9492391
If this story ever gets popular or anything, I might then write aftermath story.
Grear story! Would love to see more of it if possible.
9492592
If enough people will like this and this gets popular, I will write aftermath story
9492600
Yeah already saw that. Just showing my appreciation :)
9492601
Thank you very much.
There were some pretty weird grammatical mistakes. For example, you were missing a lot of prepositions. I don't think I've seen something quite like that before. It seems like you're not a native speaker?
Beyond the grammatical mistakes, the story was a neat idea. You just need quite a bit of polishing to make it shine.
9495214
Yeah Im finish so my English might not be the perfect. Im usually pretty self-critical about my writing and usually delete almost every writings i had done. But I hope my writing mistakes didn't ruin the story for you.
Not bad a few errors but not bad. I just wish it didn't end like that. Feels like there was much more to the story and I hope it gets continued
9501676
It all depends on the people, if they are fed up with this Anon-A-Miss thing. Im not sure if its worth to continue. Also its pretty hard to write the confrontations reasonably, but if this will get more popular Ill guess ill write an aftermath for this
There are too many anon-a-miss suicide fics. I’m working on one story where they learn a powerful lesson which is: even if you think it is over the price might not be clear at first.
Here is an upcoming story for a holiday special.
Equestria Girls Christmas Disaster:
The holidays have arrived once more but with Sunset Shimmer distancing herself more and more each day Sci-twi is determined to figure out why? No one ever expected to see the Event of Anon-a-miss rear it’s head in this manor. Can the girls help fix their mistakes they thought fixed or will this be the last holiday ever? Nothing is for certain anymore. And is this the end of Friendship?
What do you think? It’s teen rated and hopefully out by thanksgiving.
9510749
Well I always like to read Anon-A-Miss fics, I'll wait til it comes out.
9510749
That sounds some what like this story...
Might want to take a look on this first.
9526942
No it is totally different. This is set ONE YEAR AFTER. The girls will learn that even if it seems fine there may be hidden hurt.
Sunset wants nothing to do with Christmas because she’s been hurt too many times. Human Twilight sees the old sunset starts to reappear and second guess her transfer. The Rainbooms and the students have to find away to make it right while dealing with a pissed Off Alicorn of Friendship on the edge of becoming a nightmare and figuring out why sunset hates this time of year. The answer can only be found in Equestria. Can the girls save a broken spirit or is this the end of Christmas and friendship forever?
There is one thing they will learn. Betrayal has massive consequences that you may never find out.
And I thought for sure that they would tell Sunset "Oh, by the way. You can't leave. You're dead. So are we. Welcome to the Afterlife now.". And turn into skeletons. That's what happened on that Twilight Zone episode that began just like this.
Well, I'm glad that's not what happened.
I'm glad Sunset gets to live now.^_^
9700685
Glad to hear you like it
What does that mean?
Also, something tells me she ponied-up and then passed out. After that the dazzlings brought her to the hospital.
10436276
It means more like when you have lived as long as dazzlings you have developed a good skills for listening others.
10437525
Oh
Tbh, I was expecting the twist to be that she was actually dead and that the cabin was there to help prepare for her passing on or rebirth.
10437525
I would like to see a continuation of this maybe see everything from her friend's side