Getting blamed on school by day, Having fun at Sugarcube Corner by night. Sunset hangs out at Sugarcube Corner to get rid of bad time at CHS.
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I'm gonna go out on a limb here and guess English isn't your first language.
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Oh no, English was my first language because I born in Georgia, then Spanish. And also what in the fu....
9727202 Hey, ease up a bit. The author is a first timer here. Cut a little slack, there'll always be mistakes for a first story.
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Actually, this isn't my first story, I made my two stories a while back. Also NO.....
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Do you hate it or not? 🤔🤔
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Don't worry, because the second chapter would have them in detention for rest of the school before winter break is over. And what can I fix the rest of Chapter 1?
Also, I'm tired of the element of police and arrest because it happen inside the school, not in abandon factory where Sunset's being tortured to death, neither getting stabbed, and transfer to Crystal Prep. It made pissed off that everyone's mind is 'it needs to including the police', so no, I'm not including the police because it's a big deal to have, but no. It's Sunset and Fluttershy in this one location where the danger is CHS, no where else.
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Yeah you just gave me an idea to write a story with someone representing "the element of police brutality".
What are these?
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It's kinda like the Anon-a-Miss book, but not..... well, I'm terrible at this.
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You know it wouldn’t hurt if one of you would volunteer to be this person’s editor.
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Thank you. And you're awesome.
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There a lot of male characters, the random boy is Dumbbell, one of Gilda's henchmen, and I'm not including her as well. I would, but I don't. And the way that Fluttershy said 'Anon-a-Miss' to Rainbow Dash is an insult because every student calls Sunset that name, I think.
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You’re welcome.
Not bad
But it feels rushed so I'd suggest taking it slow next time
I need more of this MORE.
Also Sunset is best pony.
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Thank you, I'm eternally grateful.
It’s alright. You’re grammar isn’t the greatest, but I wish you’d kinda expand a little more on like the fight and what goes on between Sunset, The other mane 5 and Fluttershy.
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Second Chapter is done.
.....Still interested but its not as good as the first chapter.
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I did asked and to do that is to complete this story, then fix it. I'm always three steps ahead and I might quit the whole writing site with every negative criticism thrown in my way. It always gives me pain. :(
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Yeah sorry about the negative comments,if it came out too harsh.
The idea is still interesting thou despite the grammar, it was a twist to see Celestia break down as she did, but it makes so much sense.
So much pain and misery is coming from the Anon A miss mess.
I'm still put off that the Rain Bitches did what they did, and still hope for them to get arrested or sued.
I'm am glad the CMC over heard what happened, and maybe maybe they fess up or something.
Love to see this when the truth comes out Apple Jack, Dash and Rarity are blamed for all this and even accused of secretly knowing and allowing this to happen.
Since it was the CMC behind everything, can see them get accused of that, and be a great twist to be on the receiving end of being accused so easily.
Pinkie...just tell Maud on her, sure she drag Pinie by the ear to their mother and father.
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HEY, please stop, it makes me annoyed to see a fight.
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If you don't stop, I'LL QUIT THIS SITE F.O.R.E.V.E.R, PERIOD!!
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Okay I’ll stop. Just don’t go
Still want more.
English
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What you mean "English"?
can you please make more chapters. this is really good
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I'm usually do good on chapters one and two, but on number three gives me more stressed. I really appreciated your support, but the negative criticism on this site has been breaking me so bad. I'll think about the third chapter and continue on it, thank you. :)
Everything is underlined and in bold.
Why is everything underlined and in bold?
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I do capitalism in every sentence.
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Oh
More?
i dunno if this will be continued, but i'll keep checking for updates
I liked your story. I am sad that it has ended due to negativity. Going to follow and hope you will try writing again.
Any news?
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Still recovering my problems with negative criticism.
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Aw. Ps this is actually a very good story and I hope you continue it soon.
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I hope, but if it doesn't then those negative criticisms will come after me.
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Then you ignore them.
Any news?
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No, sorry. :(