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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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The end of your senior year has arrived and at the spring formal, you are dancing with the girl you've had a crush on ever since you met her. Memories of the past flood your mind and then the unexpected happens, an event that was truly wonderful and magical.

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This.

This is good.

Sweet, short, and well-executed. I only wish there was more of a buildup to the kiss in real time, and not just memories the whole length of the story. Apart from that issue, I loved it.

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Well I do plan on doing a sequel at some point involving "you" proposing to Fluttershy, I'll keep that in mind when it comes to the question being asked....and after that the wedding.....for now though, I plan on getting back to work on my big project that I've been working on and battling through writer's block with since last July.

9449655

Glad you liked it. At some point there will be a sequel involving the proposal and then the wedding. Those however will not be tied into memories so much, it will be more tied into the events leading up to the special moment. When the sequels will be written though, I'm not sure.

Great Story man πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ˜Ž

This was great.

10487161

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

10487162
Will there ever be a sequel?

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I'm not sure. I've done one involving Marble Pie, one that goes a bit more in-depth in the story line....I just finished it today.

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Oh, because I was reading the comments and you said you was going to make one involving a proposal and a wedding, but I will read the marble one.

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You want to know how horrible my memory is? It is so horrible that I had completely forgot about that. I got caught up in so many other things, well that along with IRL issues that I completely forgot.

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Don’t worry the comment was around a year ago.

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