Sometimes, I remember it one way. Sometimes, another. If I am going to have a past, then I prefer it to be multiple choice.
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Oh dang, the quote give me vibes about this video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Umkhr8F1B0
Anyways good start!
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Thank you!
Alright, you have my attention. Please, continue.
Keep this up. I'll be tracking.
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Will do!
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With pleasure!
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Thanks.
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Wow! This really fits the tone of the part where the Symbiote arrives!
I see some potential in this... I’ll be in touch...
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Try and tone down on the colored sentences and you'll be set.
I absolutely loved the movie "Venom", so I'm quite interested in this. Rarity bonding with a symbiote is an interesting idea. Good luck on the rest of the story! We are Venom.
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Got it!
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👍👍
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Thanks a lot!
Decent chapter, but it made no sense that Venom's dialogue was 1st in bold (which is a good idea), only for it to normal like everything else. Not gonna lie, but I got lost & confused on who was who, you may need to fix that...
P.S. Fun fact for ya, Venom (& I think all Symbiotes too) have an immunity to the supernatural aka magic, keep that in mind
That had me howling with laughter. Good work.
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Okay, I fixed it. All of his dialogue is in bold now.
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Thank you so much!
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Seriously, this story is very enjoyable, even if I'm not so familiar with the source material. And I like how you cover the sibling dynamic between Rarity and Sweetie Belle, something that I've rarely seen done in EqG.
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Okay, stop it!
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Considering Knull……. that's not too far fetched.
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I'll promote this as well.
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Really?
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Yes! This needs more love than it has!
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Cool, thx & don't forget that a little tip I mention about Symbiotes
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Indeed...
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MY MAN!
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Don't worry, I won't.
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Promo's up. Best of luck. (ooh, half rhyme.)
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I'm sorry, but there's no way Rarity could listen to music that loud anymore without causing herself & Venom major pain to themselves. Symbiotes are extremely sensitive like (loud) music & vibrations as well as extreme heat like fire...
P.S. Wonderful Stan Lee cameo... May he rest well...
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Actually, sound waves with frequencies between 4000 Hz and 6000 Hz are harmful to Symbiotes.
I'm willing to bet that Rarity didn't listen to music this loud.
Also, Symbiotes can build tolerance to sound after prolonged exposure.
Considering how many times this one got rejected, I thinks it's safe to assume that he was attacked by sonic weapons more than a few times.
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I decided to delete by 1st reply for this one. I'm sorry that I was acting like a know-it-all smartass & you know that part, when I said "You don't know anything" I remove it from the my comment... Again, I'm sorry for that...
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It's okay.
I understand.
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Oh, I was expecting discord, or are they the same more or less?
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Uh, who is more or less the same as Discord?
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Stan Lee
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Please don't tell me you have no idea who Stan Lee is.
Hmmm, The Plot Thickens
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He's the creator of marvel as well his originality, The comics
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No kidding.
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Basically, he was the creator of nearly ever single superhero in Marvel Comics (including the Avengers, X-Men, Fantastic Four, Spider-Man, etc.) and had a habit of making small cameos in Marvel movies until his tragic death in November 12, 2018.
I MISS HIM SO MUCH!
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Yep, i just wanna see him live up to an healthy age of 110, But he just died last year.
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What's truly sad is that he didn't live to see either Avengers 4 or a good Fantastic Four movie.
Good short chapter, but you forgot to bold Venom's dialog
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I fixed it.
Thanks for reminding me.
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Anytime & I think Rarity is gonna have a lot of fashion fun with Venom's shape-shifting ability